ACTIVIDAD 3- WRITING ACTIVITY
PRESENTADO POR: SAMUEL ARNELO SALAZAR NATALIA ISABEL ORTEGA ÁNGELA SOFÍA GIRALDO CATALINA RODRÍGUEZ JULIAN ANDRES MARIN
TUTOR: ADOLFO LEON RESTREPO B CURSO: INGLÉS A1 900001A_362 GRUPO: 900001_73
UNIVERSIDAD NACIONAL ABIERTA A DISTANCIA UNAD SANTIAGO DE CALI JULIO 27 DE 2018
INTEGRANTES
PART I Make a personal introduction:
PART II Seleccione según su preferencia uno (1) de los siguientes temas:
SAMUEL ARNELO SALAZAR
My name is Samuel A. Salazar Sanchez. I am a Technology Consultant.
For the activity i select the option of Favorite Character and my character is Daffy Duck.
I am from Cali.
Best regards
I live in Cali. I am 29 years old. My favorite hobby is learn new things.
PART IV Make an outline of your chosen topic: complete el esquema o outline del tema que selecciono. (revise los ejemplos en la guia)
PART IV Make an outline of your chosen topic: complete el esquema o outline del tema que selecciono. (revise los ejemplos en la guia)
PART VI Comment your group mates writings. Comente los escritos de sus compañeros
Paragraph 1
My comments below:
Daffy Duck is an 80-year-old mascot. He is an anthropomorphic Duck, cover by black feather and dresses one white necklace. He is part of the unstable cartoon characters with mental illness to which Warner Brothers subjects our children daily. I like Daffy because he is eccentric and he is so dumb to think and dodge
I just find some minor errors that if are handled differently i think can be more easy reading the text. Over the oration "in the first sleeping bedroom has a bed" i think is possible just delete the word "in"
I live with my dog Blackie. I am studying psychology. My favorite food is spaghetti with bolognese. My favorite TV show is Futurama. My favorite sport is ride a bike. My role for this project is alerts, i am compromise with all the participants to: "Informar a los integrantes del grupo de las novedades en el trabajo y al docente mediante el foro de trabajo y la
bullets correctly, but he can try almost anything, no matter how inept he is at it. Paragraph 2 Moving on to mental description, the Paranoid Personal Disorder and the Attention Deficit Syndrome arise in him. He has so many defects like complaining, despotic, insecure, poor social skills, rapid outbursts of temper, schizophrenia and so on, that move us to feel sympathize for him. However, he explosive energy and agitated attitude makes him one of the leading characters and for that is my favorite.
Over the oration "in the second bedroom is of my son" i think is possible just delete the word "in" Over the oration "has a bedroom is of my son has a bed" i think is possible say "The bedroom of my son has a bed" This two words "refrigenitor" and "soma" i think is refrigerator and some. Well, that's my comments. I hope they are correct. Regards
mensajería del curso, que se ha realizado el envío del documento." Best regards
The relationship with his mother it not to clear, but he dresses with pride one white necklace which she gave him when he was only a Duckie like a symbol of their relationship. Paragraph 3 Daffy is both dumb friend and maniacal archrival of Bugs. Unlike Bugs, Daffy usually like to break the fourth wall and contact with the audience. In a social point of view Bugs is a popular guy, but Daffy, Daffy is a jerk-off. Bugs trolls you, but Daffy rages on you hard. Paragraph 4
Very nice your place of residence, very good textual description of it. Best Regards
The two characters are good some people like Bugs, some other like Daffy, personally I like Daffy. Possibly I like because He is at a disadvantage, I don’t know. It is possible it is my alter ego and I think there is a little of him in all of us. Just let yourself be Daffy sometimes.
Mi name is Catalina Rodríguez I am a psychologist
CATALINA RODRIGUEZ VIVAS
My favorite topic for the activity is what is your house live?
Outilene Paragraph 1. Type of place, size and location Paragraph 2 Inside the place
I live in Cali
Paragraph 3 Outside the place
I am 36 years old
Paragraph 4 Feeling
My favorite hobby salsa dance
Best Regards Paragraph 1. I live in an apartment north of the city of Cali, is located in a very commercial area, there are shopping centers, banks, park, Schools, clinics and coffee shops. Is a very quiet and safe area. In the
in relation to the description of the favorite character Daffy Duck of my partner Samuel. is very interesting as my colleague from psychology analyzes the behavior of their favorite character, it describes from
I live my son I am stdying mastery in alternative development supportive and sustainable
apartment we live with my son of 5 years and a cat called Thor. The apartment is big and beautiful.
Paragraph 2. My favorite food es lasagna My favorite tv show is the big bang theory My favorite sport is swinmming my role for this activity is compiler, a am compromise with all the participanter to: compile the information of each participant in the forum and deliver a singke
Inside the place, there three small bedrooms , in the first sleeping bedroom has a bed, two tables of night and a mirror, in the second bedroom is of my son, has a bedroom is of my son has a bed, a closet and many toys. The third bedroom have an office where i can work, in there is a computer, a desk, the library and chair. My apartament has a
the aspect of understanding but from the essential emotional character. Inquired deeply its origin and the traits of your personality, to successfully complete a clinical diagnosis of their behavior and identify in some aspects of his own personality.
document with answers of the word.
Mi rol en esta actividad sera la de compiladora
big kitchen in there is refrigenitor a gas stove and a microwave oven. The living-rom there is small sofá and a tv set. There aren´t any tables or chairs. The diningroom, there are four chairs and a table, with big Windows. My apartament has two and baths, one of them is in the room and the other in the hall. It also has a garaje, finally there is a Little garden, in a have soma plants.
Paragraph 3 Near my apartment are shopping malls like chipichape, home center and the 14.
There is also a large park with green areas, playground, where families are going to play with their children, as people are going to exercise or walk. There are a lot of cafes such as Juan Valdez, bars such as the house of the brewer and restaurants of variety of foods.
Paragrap 4. Our apartment is beautiful, safe and quiet. It is also a place from which I work all day because there I do administrative work by sending emails and reports to my managers on the progress of the
My name is Natalia Isabel Ortega Solarte. I am a housewife. I am from la Unión Nariño. NATALIA ISABEL ORTEGA
I live in Cali. I am 31 years old. My favorite hobby is go to the movies.
Hi, the theme I chose for this activity is WHAT IS YOUR HOUSE LIKE?
Paragraph 1 Type of place: Size and location: My family and I live in and aparment. My apartment is big and is located in the south of the city of Cali. Paragraph 2 Inside the place: My apartment have 3 bedroom, a living room, a kitchen, 2 bathrooms, a balcony, a clothing yard and tv room. Paragraph 3 Outside the place: Outside off my apartment are a park, a swimming pool, a picnic, a gym, a social room and a sauna. Paragraph 4 Fellings: I like my apartment because my family is happy here
project to work. It is also a very familiar atmosphere there I share most of the time with my son, my parents, my sister, my friends, we celebrate special days such as birthdays, Christmas and the days of the mother and father Good evening, I share with you my writing: Paragraph 1 My apartment is big have 3 bedrooms in the first bedroom I sleep with my husband, the room has a bathroom, a dressing room, a bed, two nightstands, a tv, a mirror and two big windows. In the
Good afternoon companion Samuel: I see you do a very detailed description of the Daffy Duck, this is one of my husband's favorite characters; You notice that you understand the personality of this cartoon. Godsend
I live with my family. I am studying psycology. My favorite food are the pasta. My favorite tv show is the leftovers. My favorite sport is swimming. My role for this activity is deliveries: Alert on the delivery times of the products and send the document in the stipulated times, using the resources destined for the shipment.
second bedroom, sleeps my greatest son, the room has a bed, a nightstand, a desk, a wardrobe, his guitar and his tv. In the third bedroom sleeps my minor daughter, the room has a bed, a wardrobe many toys and her roller skates. Paragraph 2 The diner is big it has places for six people, the living room is median, it has a studio and a tv room, also have a balcony, a kitchen and a clothes yard. These spaces make my apartment a pleasant and comfortable place for my family, they
Best regards, Catalina: In your text I see that you are happy next to your son, it is important to provide him with security and protection. Godsend Hi, partner Angela: I see your translation is interesting and you broadly describe your apartment, apparently you live in a nice place because at the moment of telling each place, you do it by describing its color and its
Entregas: Alertar sobre los tiempos de entrega de los productos y enviar el documento en los tiempos estipulados, utilizando los recursos destinados para el envío.
really enjoy our home.
Paragraph 3 In the residential where I live there are a swimming pool, a sauna, a social room, a gym, a playground, a picnic and covered parking. My family and I live very happy in our apartment because we are surrounded by very good friends. These sites are mainly used by my children, who with their friends, have them for recreation and have fun.
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shape and this gives you the idea that you are happy with everything that is part of your home. Angela, your translation is well written and detailed.
I deliver part 1 of the individual activity.
My name is Angela Giraldo I am a call center agent ANGELA GIRALDO
The topic I selected is "What is your house like". I deliver the 4 paragraphs with the description of my house. Thanks,
I am from Cali I live in Cali I am 26 years old
OUTLINE BELOW PARAGRAPH 1 TYPE OF PLACE / LOCATION • · I live in an apartment on the second floor, is in front of the park of Capri PARAGRAPH 2 INSIDE DESCRIPTION • · My apartment is very bright; on entering is the lounge and social bathroom on the right side. PARAGRAPH 3 DESCRIPTION OF THE KITCHEN LAUNDRY AREA • In front of the living room is the kitchen of American type and two white chairs • · The kitchen has a large window overlooking the laundry area PARAGRAPH 4 BEDROOM DESCRIPTION • ·the master bedroom has bathroom and balcony
It is in the south of the city of Cali, it is close to the malls and close to the best schools and universities, within which my children study. It is a very commercial sector, it is also very safe and there are many places to visit. Paragraph 1 I live in an apartment on the second floor, is in front of the park of Capri, surrounded by many green areas, trees, sports tracks and ecological routes for exercise. Behind my building is the avenue pasoancho, there are supermarkets like La 14 and Alkosto, as well as bakeries,
My favorite hobby is reading I live with my mom and my cat I am studying Psicology My favorite food is the lemon cheese cake My favorite tv show is the walking dead My favorite sport is tennis I choose the role of reviewer, its functions are: to ensure that the writing complies with the rules of presentation of the work required by the teacher.
• ·The auxiliary room has the double bed, green carpets, fuchsia and lilac
restaurants, pharmacies and distributors. Paragraph 2 My apartment is very bright; on entering is the lounge and social bathroom on the right side. In the living room are the furniture, the coffee table and a carpet of earth tones. To the front of the sofa is the flat screen TV and entertainment center with dvd and stereo. To the left side of the sofa is a gray floor lamp, and to the right is the computer on a table, with some books on the top. Paragraph 3
Thanks.
In front of the living room is the kitchen of American type and two white chairs, the shelves are made of wood and to the right side of these is the refrigerator; At the top of the refrigerator is the microwave and at the counter other appliances like blender and coffee maker. The kitchen has a large window overlooking the laundry area, where you can find the washing machine, my cat's litter box and some plants that I like to take care of. Paragraph 4 From the living room there is a hallway leading to
JULAN ANDRES MARIN
Taking into account the indications of the activity I will make delivery of my personal presentation My name Is: Julian Andres Marin
the bedrooms, the master bedroom has bathroom and balcony; in it is the double bed in front of the door with 2 bedside tables on each side, the closet to the right of the bed, the Coat rack for wallets and a long mirror. The auxiliary room has the double bed, green carpets, fuchsia and lilac, the wardrobe and 2 bedside tables with lamp. 1. Paragraph. Hello the Topic I Choose for The activity is Your best friend’s routine.
Outline.(Your Best Friend's Routine)
Best Regards.
3. Paragraph: At Night
1. Paragraph: In the Morning 2 Paragraph: Afternoon
3. Paragraph: In the late Hours of The night
In the morning my best friend andres, Usually work with his friends In a Educational Project that aims to educate People in areas such As leadership, Emotional
I Am a Student of Psychology I am From: Cali Colombia I Live in: Cali I Am 20 Years old My favorite Hobby is Reading and Playing Sports I Live With My parents And my Pet My favorite sport is: Martial Arts My favorite Tv Show is: Espn My favorite food is: Potato Salad
inteligence etc. So that with this Knowledge people can Develop the best Version of them selves And achieve what They Most Want. 2. Paragraph. In the afternoon andres, He usually goes with several friends, After his training session he arrives at his house, He eats something, He showers and them he begins to read about his interests As they are horror novels and Psychology Books. 3. Paragraph. At night andres dedicates his time to study, He studies Psychology,
Career in wich he takes 1 semester, In that time of the day he devotes his time to dialog with his colleagues about the works and activities to develop of the race. 4. Paragraph. In the late hours of the Night after having Finished studying And finishing with Is Engagements and Work, He usually Plays video games wich is a Pastime That he has Since Childhood, He usually Plays with his close friends.
PART VII - As a group select the best writing. Escojan el escrito que representara al grupo.
Greetings tutor and companions, The topic I selected is "What is your house like". I deliver the 4 paragraphs with the description of my house. Thanks, ANGELA GIRALDO Paragraph 1 I live in an apartment on the second floor, is in front of the park of Capri, surrounded by many green areas, trees, sports tracks and ecological routes for exercise. Behind my building is the avenue pasoancho, there are supermarkets like La 14 and Alkosto, as well as bakeries, restaurants, pharmacies and distributors. Paragraph 2 My apartment is very bright; on entering is the lounge and social bathroom on the right side. In the living room are the furniture, the coffee table and a carpet of earth tones. To the front of the sofa is the flat screen TV and entertainment center with dvd and stereo. To the left side of the sofa is a gray floor lamp, and to the right is the computer on a table, with some books on the top. Paragraph 3 In front of the living room is the American type kitchen and two white chairs, the shelves are made of wood and to the right side of these is the refrigerator; At the top of the refrigerator is the microwave and at the counter other appliances like blender and coffee maker. The kitchen has a large window overlooking the laundry area, where you can find the washing machine, my cat's litter box and some plants that I like to take care of. Paragraph 4 From the living room there is a hallway leading to the bedrooms, the master bedroom has bathroom and balcony; in it is the double bed in front of the door with 2 bedside tables on each side, the closet to the right of the bed, the Coat rack for wallets and a long mirror. The auxiliary room has the double bed, green carpets, fuchsia and lilac, the wardrobe and 2 bedside tables with lamp.
Bibliographic references required
UNAD Florida, http://campus35.unad.edu.co/invil18/mod/resource/view.php?id=607 UNAD Florida, http://campus35.unad.edu.co/invil18/mod/resource/view.php?id=608 UNAD Florida, http://campus35.unad.edu.co/invil18/mod/resource/view.php?id=609