Motiv Letter Sebelum Revisi.docx

There are various reasons that make me want to study at ABC. First of all, ABC is one of the best universities in the field of business and economics. Since I aspire a career in Investment Banking, studying at ABC would be of a great help considering job prospects at the bulge bracket banks, since former students of ABC are highly regarded in the financial world. I was also excited when I noticed that you offer courses as ‘Mergers and Acquisitions’ and ‘Investment Banking’. These courses would provide me with a deeper knowledge and more insight in subjects that are necessary for my future career path. Second is the opportunity to gain international experience in one of the most beautiful cities in the world. I think studying, living and having a good time with other international students will broaden my horizon and enable to build friendships with other students from all over the world. Studying abroad at ABC seems like the perfect opportunity to meet a completely different culture, learn another language, experience other educational system and enrich my curriculum vitae, as well as gain more independence. Last but not least is the chance to dwell in the famous city of Mordor. The city offers a great variety for spending your time. I want to visit all the cultural attractions Mordor has to offer, for example the tower of Sauron or the orc town. I am a big football fan too. In Holland we don't have any big international clubs but with Inter and AC Mordor playing I will be definitely having a great time visiting their matches! I am confident I would prove to be an enthusiastic and hard working student. Thank you for considering my request and I look forward to your positive response.

My name is Septia Rani. Now, I am studying Computer Science (master degree) at XXX. I am applying for the Scholarship Program of Erasmus Mundus YYY at ZZZ, because I would like to experience the academic atmosphere in Europe which has a high standard in research and innovation. I have a big dream to become an expert in Computer Science, so I need to enrich my academic background, deepen my understanding of the subject I am interested in, and also broaden my knowledge in another subjects. Joining the course of Computer Engineering is an excellent step to reach my dream. I also enjoy doing cultural exchanges such as learning new languages, making friends, and other activities that will improve myself both personally and professionally. So, from the reasons above, I am giving a try to myself to be part of this program. Growing up in a culturally diverse country makes me respect to diversity. I used to interact and cooperate with different kinds of people. Moreover, I have been living in several cities in my country. It always becomes an interesting challenge for me to adapt with new environments and I am ready to learn all the positive things in order to adapt to the new cultures. I also have ability to transfer my knowledge. When I was in college, I tried to explore deeper in many Computer Engineering subjects by myself. Finally, because of my excellent academic record, I was entrusted to become a lecture assistant in Algorithm and Artificial Intelligence. I always think that it is also a good thing if we have something in which we are skillful and we share it with other people to enrich what we already have in our self. Since I was in Senior High School, I have a big interest in informatics and computer. At that time, I was so curious how computer can provide us a lot of useful tools. From this point, I started to learn about programming. I was focus to deepen my understanding of Algorithm. Finally in 2010, I got opportunity to participate in programming competition with my team at Asia Regional Contest. We got honorable mention in this contest. I was so excited because I could experience an international atmosphere and meet many students from many other countries which had remarkable talent in programming. For my final project (bachelor degree), I did research about Gender Classification Based on Face Images. I chose this topic due to my interest in Artificial Intelligence and Computer Vision, which are now playing important roles in developing

computer based technology. In the future, I plan to work my thesis in the field of Computer Vision, about XXX. I would like to apply for the Erasmus Mundus YYY, at ZZZ for Master in Computer Engineering program. The program of Student Exchange, for 6 months, starting on XXX is perfectly suitable for me. After I finish the Student Exchange program, I will return to my country and finish my master degree. After that, I would like to devote myself in education field, become researcher or lecturer in my country. I am sure by participating in the program of Student Exchange, I will earn more knowledge and valuable experiences and in the same time will share it to other people in my environment. So there will be more people who can benefit from Computer Science/Engineering and moreover they can develop computer based technology.

The ... University is one of the leading management universities in the world. Therefore, my decision to choose this extraordinary university - with all the opportunities implied - was obvious. What is more, the exchange programs offered by this university were one decisive fact for choosing this university a deciding factor in choosing this university, and so I am pleased to address my application for University of ABC a for the summer semester 20.. to you now. The last sentence in this paragraph seems strange to me. Perhaps you can re-write it. For me personally, doing an exchange semester is an integral part of my studies. I would like to seize this invaluable opportunity which is an incredible chance to broaden my horizons and develop my personality. I am looking forward to meeting people from all over the world, getting to know their beliefs and opinions and learning to deal with differences . If nothing else, the deeper understanding of the US American (choose either "US" or "American" culture I would gain from this exchange semester would certainly be an invaluable asset when it comes to starting a career in the US/ improveimproving my post-graduate employment prospects in the US. Another important reason for applying to an American university is that I want to improve mycommand of English (either "improve my command of the English language" or "improve my English") so that I am able to successfully complete an English-speaking master's program. What is more, I find it particularly interesting to get an insight into see/experience the way American professors teach and how they deal with study-related topics. (An American would probably say "What is more, I'm particularly interested in experiencing....") I chose to apply for University of ABC because of its outstanding reputation and its high number of international students. The diverse community is a true reflection of its special location in the heart of a dynamic world center. Thus, I believe ABC is the ideal place for people that want to study in a multicultural environment. Aside from this, I am absolutely fascinated by ABC's art and cultural scene and I believe that studying abroad in one of the world's most important financial centers will be very beneficial to my future career and will improve my post-graduate employment prospects. It would be my pleasure to represent the ... University at the University of ABC during the summer term 20.. . I regard the exchange term not only as a great chance to enlarge my professional knowledge, but also to enrich my abilities in the social and intercultural fields. Thus, I would highly appreciate the opportunity to be invited for a personal interview.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing with regard to participation in an academic mobility program for students. At the moment I am a second-year student of Physics and Technical Science Department at the ___________ University. My specialty is Automation and Control. Since the school I excel at study, especially at Math and Physics and always try to do my best in learning major subjects. Also I am studying on a distance learning at Technical University of Berlin. I study the European pilot project which calls the Basics of Modern "TRIZ". I shall have been studying there for a one semester. As every person I have targets for the bright future and eager to achieve them, to reach new highs. The main aim of my student life is studying abroad. And it is obviously that the program of an academic mobility gives me a golden opportunity to achieve my purpose. "He that would eat the fruit must climb the tree" - popular wisdom. Today, being a student, I realize an importance of participating in an academic mobility. Every day our life gives us a chance to reach new highs. And it is our choice to use this golden opportunity or not. I have made a choice, I shall use this chance to get a good education abroad. As a result, It motivates me to strive for my brilliant future and I have come to the idea that I want to be an exchange student of an academic mobility. First of all, it gives a perfect possibility to expand the borders of my knowledge. On the one hand, education abroad will help me to be well-qualified and high-educated professional in the future. On the other hand, I think, it is magnificent to study at one of the most popular university in the world. Moreover, studying abroad will help me to merge with foreign educational environment, to plunge in it. It is a brilliant possibility to get new pleasant impressions and emotions. Also it will give me a perfect opportunity to share piece of my culture and traditions with students from other countries. Secondly, Studying abroad will give me the best experience in my life. It will help me to become more independent and self-supportive. It will give a chance to solve my problems without any support and to do it by myself. It will make me stronger. The program of an academic mobility will help me to get acquainted with foreign educational system, culture, traditions, history, local customs, to know what they are interested in, to expand my knowledge in geographical and historical sphere. What can be more interesting and useful than these? Thirdly, nowadays my personal goal is self-improvement. And to achieve it I should learn more and experience. Experience is the best teacher which will help me in my professional targets. Learning about other country from inside out will give me a chance to be a participant of their social life. It will create not only material values, it will also create my personality. It will influence my self-education and self-improvement which is one of the most essential part of personal and professional targets. On the whole, I understand that it will be difficult to study abroad, but I will try to adapt, to do my best in studying. Such as other people I have a perspective view of my future and because of that fact I want to be a participant of an academic mobility. Thank you for your time and consideration. Sincerely, __________.