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: NGUYEN DINH HUNG
Due Date: 29-09-2008
Writing task: The graph shows the figures for CFC emissions in four countries between 1989 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
________________________________________________ The graph shows the amount of CFC emissions over a twelve-year period from 1989 to 2001 in four countries, Egypt, Poland, Ukraine and Malaysia. It can be seen that CFC gases have a downward trend in all of them over twelve years.
In 1989, Poland has the highest CFC emission in four countries, which was about 5000 metric tons (MT) while it was approximately 4600 MT in Ukraine, 3200 MT in Malaysia and 2300 MT in Egypt. After that, there was a steep decrease of CFC gases from 1989 to 1995 in two countries, Poland and Ukraine, which decreased dramatically to a low point of 900 MT in Ukraine and 1800 MT in Poland. Since then CFC emissions has staged a partial recovery and stopped at just about 1150 MT in Ukraine in 2001 whereas it continued to plunge down to 400 MT in 1998 and got a low of 200 MT in 2001 in Poland.
It was far different from the sharp downwards trend in both Ukraine and Poland, there was a slight decline in the last two countries, Egypt and Malaysia. The amount of gases leveled off over the first six years from 1989 to 1995 in Malaysia and then dropped slowly during the next six years, a low point of 2000 MT in 2001. Similarly, CFC emissions also fell steadily over a twelve-year period in Egypt, which was 2300 MT in 1989 and 1300 in 2001.
Writing Skill Report WRITING SKILLS TASK RESPONSE answer question fully relevant accurate (ideas) appropriate COHERENCE Logical organisation of information and ideas paragraph TS, SS, DS etc linking words COHESION Organisation of language subject – verb aggrement word order tenses articles pronouns (referents) GRAMMAR range of sentences range of structures VOCABULARY formal – informal range of topics word forms collocation (usage) SPELLING rate of error PUNTUATION
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: NGUYEN DINH HUNG
Due Date: 29-09-2008
Writing task: The graph shows the figures for CFC emissions in four countries between 1989 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
________________________________________________ The graph shows the amount of CFC emissions over a twelve-year period from 1989 to 2001 in four countries, Egypt, Poland, Ukraine and Malaysia. It can be seen that CFC gases have a downward trend in all of them over twelve years.
In 1989, Poland has the highest CFC emission in four countries, which was about 5000 metric tons (MT) while it was approximately 4600 MT in Ukraine, 3200 MT in Malaysia and 2300 MT in Egypt. After that, there was a steep decrease of CFC gases from 1989 to 1995 in two countries, Poland and Ukraine, which decreased dramatically to a low point of 900 MT in Ukraine and 1800 MT in Poland. Since then CFC emissions has staged a partial recovery and stopped at just about 1150 MT in Ukraine in 2001 whereas it continued to plunge down to 400 MT in 1998 and got a low of 200 MT in 2001 in Poland.
It was far different from the sharp downwards trend in both Ukraine and Poland, there was a slight decline in the last two countries, Egypt and Malaysia. The amount of gases leveled off over the first six years from 1989 to 1995 in Malaysia and then dropped slowly during the next six years, a low point of 2000 MT in 2001. Similarly, CFC emissions also fell steadily over a twelve-year period in Egypt, which was 2300 MT in 1989 and 1300 in 2001.
Writing Skill Report WRITING SKILLS TASK RESPONSE answer question fully relevant accurate (ideas) appropriate COHERENCE Logical organisation of information and ideas paragraph TS, SS, DS etc linking words COHESION Organisation of language subject – verb aggrement word order tenses articles pronouns (referents) GRAMMAR range of sentences range of structures VOCABULARY formal – informal range of topics word forms collocation (usage) SPELLING rate of error PUNTUATION
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