Writing Task 1-071008
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: NGUYEN DINH HUNG
Due Date: 07-10-2008
Writing task:
The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for CocaCola. Write a report for university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The pie chart shows the percentage of total bottles of Coca-Cola sold all over the world in 2000, and the graph illustrates the changes in share price between 1996 and 2001.
According to the pie chart, Coca-cola sold a total of 17.1 billion dollars of their fizzy drink worldwide in 2000. North America kept the highest proportion, which was 30.4% of the total volume. The second highest was Latin America (25.7%). Asia and Europe purchased 16.4% and 20.5% of the total volume respectively. The lowest purchase (7%) was in Africa and Middle East.
It is apparent from the graph that there has been a dramatic fluctuation in Coca-Cola share price since 1996. In that year, the share price was valued just under $35, but it jumped sharply to approximately $69 in 1997. It hit a trough in mid-1997, but then reached a peak at $80 in mid-1998. From then until 2000, its value fell dramatically, reaching a low point of $48 in 2000 but there was a slight recovery in mid-2000.
Writing Skill Report WRITING SKILLS TASK RESPONSE answer question fully relevant accurate (ideas) appropriate COHERENCE Logical organisation of information and ideas paragraph TS, SS, DS etc linking words COHESION Organisation of language subject – verb aggrement word order tenses articles pronouns (referents) GRAMMAR range of sentences range of structures VOCABULARY formal – informal range of topics word forms collocation (usage) SPELLING rate of error PUNTUATION
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: NGUYEN DINH HUNG
Due Date: 07-10-2008
Writing task:
The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for CocaCola. Write a report for university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The pie chart shows the percentage of total bottles of Coca-Cola sold all over the world in 2000, and the graph illustrates the changes in share price between 1996 and 2001.
According to the pie chart, Coca-cola sold a total of 17.1 billion dollars of their fizzy drink worldwide in 2000. North America kept the highest proportion, which was 30.4% of the total volume. The second highest was Latin America (25.7%). Asia and Europe purchased 16.4% and 20.5% of the total volume respectively. The lowest purchase (7%) was in Africa and Middle East.
It is apparent from the graph that there has been a dramatic fluctuation in Coca-Cola share price since 1996. In that year, the share price was valued just under $35, but it jumped sharply to approximately $69 in 1997. It hit a trough in mid-1997, but then reached a peak at $80 in mid-1998. From then until 2000, its value fell dramatically, reaching a low point of $48 in 2000 but there was a slight recovery in mid-2000.
Writing Skill Report WRITING SKILLS TASK RESPONSE answer question fully relevant accurate (ideas) appropriate COHERENCE Logical organisation of information and ideas paragraph TS, SS, DS etc linking words COHESION Organisation of language subject – verb aggrement word order tenses articles pronouns (referents) GRAMMAR range of sentences range of structures VOCABULARY formal – informal range of topics word forms collocation (usage) SPELLING rate of error PUNTUATION
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