Writing Task 1-061008
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: NGUYEN DINH HUNG
Due Date: 06-10-2008
Writing task: The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs DVD or video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
________________________________________________ The chart shows the changes of the sales of games software, CDs and DVD/video all over the world in billion dollar($bn) between 2000 and 2003. It can be seen that the consumption of games software and DVD/video increased steadily whereas the sales of CDs decreased slightly.
The sale of DVD or video rose approximately by 13$bn from 2000 to 2003. In 2000, just over 18$bn in value of DVD/video was sold, but it went up to approximately 31$bn in 2003. Similarly, the sale of games software also increased in this period, but less sharply. It went up by 6$bn from 2000 to 2003 (13$bn and 19$bn respectively).
In contrast, there was a slight decrease in sale of DVD/video during the same time period. In 2000, its worth was just over 34$bn, but in 2003 it fell slowly to approximately 32$bn.
Writing Skill Report WRITING SKILLS TASK RESPONSE answer question fully relevant accurate (ideas) appropriate COHERENCE Logical organisation of information and ideas paragraph TS, SS, DS etc linking words COHESION Organisation of language subject – verb aggrement word order tenses articles pronouns (referents) GRAMMAR range of sentences range of structures VOCABULARY formal – informal range of topics word forms collocation (usage) SPELLING rate of error PUNTUATION
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: NGUYEN DINH HUNG
Due Date: 06-10-2008
Writing task: The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs DVD or video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
________________________________________________ The chart shows the changes of the sales of games software, CDs and DVD/video all over the world in billion dollar($bn) between 2000 and 2003. It can be seen that the consumption of games software and DVD/video increased steadily whereas the sales of CDs decreased slightly.
The sale of DVD or video rose approximately by 13$bn from 2000 to 2003. In 2000, just over 18$bn in value of DVD/video was sold, but it went up to approximately 31$bn in 2003. Similarly, the sale of games software also increased in this period, but less sharply. It went up by 6$bn from 2000 to 2003 (13$bn and 19$bn respectively).
In contrast, there was a slight decrease in sale of DVD/video during the same time period. In 2000, its worth was just over 34$bn, but in 2003 it fell slowly to approximately 32$bn.
Writing Skill Report WRITING SKILLS TASK RESPONSE answer question fully relevant accurate (ideas) appropriate COHERENCE Logical organisation of information and ideas paragraph TS, SS, DS etc linking words COHESION Organisation of language subject – verb aggrement word order tenses articles pronouns (referents) GRAMMAR range of sentences range of structures VOCABULARY formal – informal range of topics word forms collocation (usage) SPELLING rate of error PUNTUATION
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