Writing Feedback 1

WRITING FEEDBACK: Your Country’s Culture - Type of text: a magazine, an article, a letter… - Reader/ addressee (originality, appealing for the reader) ( Andrei) vs (stereotypes) - For example: …. - Cohesion: well-structured, united. - Discourse Markers / Connectors - Introducing examples: For example / For instance like / such as - Ordering information: First, Second, Third….Finally STRUCTURE

- Ordering Events in time: First-Then-After-Finally - Introducing topics: Concerning the cuisine, (Isabel) As far as the cuisine is concerned, Regarding the cuisine, With regards to the cuisine, - Coherence: logical. - Distribute information logically (Paco) (Sonia) // - Planning (Sofía & Paco) - Justify or explain your ideas (Marta & dialects) - Avoid repetitions

- Contractions in formal style - Meet / Know - Other / another - very / more / much / many - To + verb / for + nouns GRAMMAR

- Using questions in introductions (Julio) - Word order - Subject-Verb-Object/Complement - Spain is very attractive for tourists because its weather and life style. Double subject: Paella it’s a popular dish. - meet / know

VOCABULARY

- What’s more - Spain/ Spanish /Spaniard Spain Culture - meal / food / dish / cuisine ------------------FIND OUT YOURSELVES!