Mc English 101 Week 4

Revision

MC English 101 Week 4

Revision: what does it mean?

Revising Tips: What do you do?

Conclusions: Why Revise?

Self Assessment Rubric: 4: Complete Understanding, 3: Developing

Understanding, 2: Some Understanding, 1: No Understanding Ideas focus on specific experience or event and present an engaging picture of the action and people involved. The organization pattern adds to the clarity of the essay and includes a strong beginning that hooks the reader The words show instead of tell about; they appeal to the senses and evoke pictures in the reader’s mind. The sentences are clear, varied in structure, and smooth.

Self Assessment Reexamine your essay and grade your

performance based on the rubric. Rewrite one paragraph on a separate sheet of paper utilizing the Revision tips 