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ERROR SPOTTING (ENGLISH) AFTERSCHO☺OL

– DEVELOPING CHANGE MAKERS CENTRE FOR SOCIAL ENTREPRENEURSHIP PGPSE PROGRAMME – World’ Most Comprehensive programme in social entrepreneurship & spiritual entrepreneurship OPEN FOR ALL FREE FOR ALL

ERROR SPOTTING (ENGLISH) Dr. T.K. Jain.

AFTERSCHO☺OL Centre for social entrepreneurship Bikaner M: 9414430763 [email protected] www.afterschool.tk, www.afterschoool.tk

I have not hear from my daughter for long • I have not heard from my daughter since long

I don’t care for a straw equal to him. • I don’t care a straw for him.

Ajay was fortunately not hurt in accident with the car. • Fortunately, Ajay was not hurt in the accident with the car.

Ajay is very wisdom man certainly. • Certainly, Ajay is very wise man.

Story of Pawan is much amusing. • The Story of Pawan is very amusing. • Or • Pawan’s Story is very amusing.

He is very fatty and he cannot walk fastly. • He is too fat to walk fast. • Or • He is so fat that he can’t walk fast.

None except the brave becomes entrepreneur • None but the brave become entrepreneurs.

I told him on his face that he cannot became entrepreneur • I told him on his face that he could not become an entrepreneur

Ram married with an entrepreneur girl • Ram married an entrepreneurial girl

Police is not allowed to enter into this holy temple. • Police are not allowed to enter this holy temple.

This is same shirt which I purchase yesterday • This is the same shirt which I purchased yesterday

A horse cannot run with a broken leg. • A horse, with a broken leg, cannot run.

He carefully does his work. • He does his work carefully. (when the adverb is affecting the entire sentence, it should come in the beginning or in the end).

The old man lived miserly. • The old man lived in a miserly way.

Prabhakar looks very better today. • Prabhakar looks much better today.

Jitendra scarecely go to films, but whenever he go, he is caught. • Jitendra rarely goes to films, but whenever he goes, he is caught.

Of course, you will succeeded in your CS examination. • You will certainly succeed in your CS examination.

He is named as Ram. • He is named Ram.

Manmohan Singh is respected greatly. • Manmohan Singh is greatly respected. • (put such adverbs before the verbs)

Can Ankit part from his book for 1 day? • Can Ankit part with his book for 1 day?

Vedas are in existance since time immemorial • The Vedas are in existence from time immemorial

The patient is comparatively better today. • The patient is comparatively well today.

Swati is only free in the morning • Swati is free only in the morning

Ajay seldom or ever lies • Ajay seldom or never lies

Gold of South Africa is exported to many countries • The Gold of South Africa is exported to many countries

The honesty is best policy • Honesty is the best policy

Udaipur is Paris of India. • Udaipur is the Paris of India.

USA is richest country of the world • The USA is the richest country of the world

What are the last news ? • What is the latest news?

Ganga is holy river • The Ganga is a holy river

Panjab is land of 5 rivers. • The Panjab is land of 3 rivers (two rivers are now part of Pakistan).

He is a European, but his wife is a Indian. • He is an European, but his wife is an Indian.

Wheat of Punjab is sent to other states of India • The wheat of Punjab is sent to other states of India

Higher we go, cooler it is • The higher we go, the cooler it is

You should not hurry, there are plenty of times. • You need not hurry, there is plenty of time.

Can I take your car? • May I borrow your car?

One must serve his country • One ought to serve one’s country

Should you care for a glass cold drink. • Would you care for a glass of cold drink.

He ran so fast so that he could catch the train • He ran fast so that he might catch the train

I am knowing him • I know him

He get up early in morning • He gets up early in the morning

He quitted this place last year. • He quit this place last year.

He know his faults • He knows his faults

The man is a mortal • Man is mortal.

Jaswant Singh is a better writer than a politician • Jaswant Singh is a better writer than politician

Summer of this year is horrible. • The summer of this year is horrible.

Cow is a domestic animal • The Cow is a domestic animal

I attend the college everyday. • I attend college everyday.

I have lost watch that my father give me. • I have lost the watch that my father gave to me

Should we look down on poor? • Should we look down upon the poor?

Hindus and Muslims live in best perfect harmonious in Bikaner for years. • The Hindus and the Muslims have been living in perfect harmony in Bikaner for years.

The english is the language of english. • English is the language of the English.

Had you been to Kashmir, I had also gone there. • Had you been to Kashmir, I would have also gone there.

Ten were killed and one taken prisoner. • Ten were killed and one was taken prisoner. • (helping verb were cannot be used for one prisoner).

The news were broadcasted from AIR at 5 AM • The news was broadcast from AIR at 5 AM

If I am you, I would do it. • If I were you, I would do it.

If I shall reach late, I shall be punished. • If I reach late, I shall be punished. (don’t use will / shall with if).

Did you wrote that letter? • Did you write that letter?

Cattle was grazing • The Cattle were grazing

You mistake in thinking that I am against you. • You are mistaken in thinking that I am against you.

The pick-pocket was arrested and his pocket search. • The pick-pocket was arrested and his pockets were searched.

Either of two singers are welcome • Either of the two singers is welcome

Hard work and honesty are needed for success. • Hard work and honesty is needed for success.

The entire class have failed in the examination • The entire class has failed in the examination

The child with his parents have arrived. • The child with his parents has arrived.

Many a demonstrators were arrested • Many a demonstrators was arrested

I doest not like this kinds of jokes • I do not like these kind of jokes

Goti, not less than I am to blame. • Goti, not less than I is to blame.

The wood cutter falled three trees • The wood cutter felled three trees

The jury was divided on the issue • The jury were divided on the issue

The jury were unanimous on the issue • The jury was unanimous on the issue

Praachi can sing better than me. • Praachi can sing better than I.

That Man who they thought to be a gentleman, is a rogue. • The man whom they thought to be a gentleman, is a rogue.

Neither of 3 persons is fit for PGPSE programme • None of the 3 persons is fit for PGPSE programme

This is one of the best suggestions that has ever been made by you. • This is one of the best suggestions that have ever been made by you.

I who is your teacher, should be respected • I who am your teacher, ought to be respected

India’s population is far more than USA • India’s population is far more than that of the USA

The police has arrested the theif • The police have arrested the theif

My uncle’s friend’s son is become a doctor • The son of my uncle’s friend is a doctor • Or • The son of my uncle’s friend has become a doctor

His hat has blow by air • His hat has been blown off by wind.

GOOD NIGHT! HOW DO YOU DO? • GOOD EVENING ! HOW DO YOU DO?

MY BROTHER IS IN TEACHING LINE • MY BROTHER IS IN TEACHING PROFESSION

WAGES OF SIN ARE DEATH • THE WAGES OF SIN IS DEATH

THE MAGISTRATE HAS PASSED ORDER FOR RELEASE HIM • THE MAGISTRATE HAS PASSED ORDERS FOR HIS RELEASE.

THERE IS NO SPACE FOR YOU ON THIS BENCH • THERE IS NO ROOM FOR YOU ON THIS BENCH

SUCH PHENOMENA HAS NEVER BEEN SAW • SUCH PHENOMENA HAVE NEVER BEEN SEEN.

WHAT IS YOUR BIRTH DATE? • WHAT IS THE DATE OF YOUR BIRTH?

IT IS SURPRISING THAT GAUTAM DON’T KNOW ALPHABETS. • IT IS SURPRISING THAT GAUTAM DOESN’T KNOW ALPHABET.

YOU CANNOT AVOID TO MAKES MISTAKES • YOU CANNOT AVOID MAKING MISTAKES.

I ENJOY TO MEET MY OLD STUDENTS AT AFTERSCHOOOL • I ENJOY MEETING MY OLD STUDENTS AT AFTERSCHOOOL

RISHI DISLIKES TO SING IN FRONT OF AFTERSCHOOLIANS • RISHI DISLIKES SINGING IN FRONT OF AFTERSCHOOLIANS

I DISLIKE YOU TO GO THERE • I DISLIKE YOUR GOING THERE

AJAY ENTERED INTO THE TRAIN AT BIKANER AND GOT OF AT MERTA • AJAY ENTERED THE TRAIN AT BIKANER AND GOT OFF AT MERTA

WORK HARD LEST YOU SHOULD NOT FAIL IN CS EXAMINATION – SAID DHAVAL TO AJAY • “WORK HARD LEST YOU SHOULD FAIL IN THE CS EXAMINATION” – SAID DHAVAL TO AJAY

GIVE ME ALL YOUR INFORMATIONS ABOUT GOTI • GIVE ME ALL YOUR INFORMATION ABOUT GOTI

I HAVE READ PAWAN’S POETRY, WHO IS A VERY ROMANTIC POET • I HAVE READ POETRY OF PAWAN, WHO IS A VERY ROMANTIC POET

I SHALL REACH STATION, BEFORE THE TRAIN ARRIVES. • I SHALL HAVE REACHED THE STATION, BEFORE THE TRAIN ARRIVES.

YOU MUST SUBMIT YOUR APPLY BEFORE TIME • YOU MUST SUBMIT YOUR APPLICATION IN TIME

YOU HAVE NO PROVE OF AJAY’S INNOCENCE • YOU HAVE NO PROOF AJAY’S INNOCENCE

DON’T ENTER IN THE BRIDE CHAMBER, THE ROOM WHERE SHE PREPARES HER • DON’T ENTER THE BRIDAL CHAMBER, THE ROOM WHERE SHE PREPARES HERSELF

WHILE I ENTERED INTO THE ROOM, NOISE STOP ABRUPT. • WHEN I ENTERED THE ROOM, NOISE STOPPED ABRUPTLY.

AFTERSCHOOLIANS ARE LISTENING ATTENTIVE AND SITTING SMILING • AFTERSCHOOLIANS ARE LISTENING ATTENTIVELY AND SITTING WITH A SMILE.

LAW AND ORDER HAVE TO BE FORCED BY POLICE • LAW AND ORDER HAS TO BE ENFORCED BY THE POLICE

KATRINA KAIF TURNED AWAY PANKAJ’S PROPOSAL • KATRINA KAIF TURNED DOWN PANKAJ’S PROPOSAL

HIS DECISIONS BROUGHT ABOUT HIS RUINOUS. • HIS DECISIONS BROUGHT ABOUT HIS RUIN.

He came yesterday morning. • He came last morning.

He will coming tomorrow evening • He will be coming next evening

After hearing him patient, the principal said him that what really mattered was how he does his job.

• After listening to him patiently, the principal told him what really mattered was how he did his job.

You are learning english for last 2 years, but you show no improvement whatsoever. • You have been learning english for the last 2 years, but you show no improvement whatsoever.

He received order to enforce discipline on his subordinates. • He received orders to enforce discipline among his subordinates.

The police inspector careful inspected into the matter and bring the facts on the surface. • The police inspector carefully inspected the matter and brought the facts to the surface.

Kareena is neglectful in her duty but not neglectful in her appearance.

• Kareena is neglectful of her duty but not of her appearance.

Ankit has never and will never take his classes casual. • Ankit has never taken and will never take his classes casually.

You are not paid to critisize, all you need to do is to carry out my order • You are not paid to critisize, all you need do is to carry out my orders

The minister visiting were told that one of those boy’s result was commendable. • The visiting minister was told that one of those boys’ result was commendable.

Make him to understand that if he do not work hard, he will not given promotion. • Make him understand that if he does not work hard, he would not be given promotion.

Dhairya found himself in competition with men who were as good if not better then him • Dhairya found himself in competition with men who were as good as if not better than himself.

I object to war, not because it drains economy, but that it seems inhuman.

• I object to war, not because it drains economy, but because it seems inhuman.

I was unhappy at the thought that I couldn’t attend Rishi’s marriage tomorrow. • I was unhappy at the thought that I couldn’t attend Rishi’s marriage yesterday.

She is as proudy that she will not submit to correction in some situation. • She is so proud that she will not submit to correction in any situation.

He being dishonest, he is in the bad book of the CEO. Being dishonest, he is in the bad book of the CEO.

The boy in red shirt was the winner of confluence 2009, held by IIMA. • The boy in the red shirt was the winner of the confluence 2009, held at IIMA.

According to my opinion, you should work very hard on business planning exercises, for the sake of your development. • In my opinion, you should work very hard on business planning exercises, for the sake of your development.

He turned deaf ear to the advices of his mentor. • He turned a deaf ear to the advice of his mentor.

Let Mahipal and he solve your problems, due to they are experts in this subject. • Let Mahipal and him solve your problems, as they are experts in this subject.

The teacher as well as the students were playing in rock grounds. • The teacher as well as the students was playing in rocky ground.

The king ordered that he should be hung till death. His only crime was that he spoken freely on people right • The king ordered that he should be hanged till death. His only crime was that he spoke freely on people’s right

At last Vipin spoke : “money makes mare go” • At last Vipin spoke : “money makes the mare go”

Kindly do the needful. • Kindly do what is necessary

We are living in the Delhi for 3 years. • We have been living in Delhi for 3 years.

Be respect to older members in your family • Be respectful to the elder members of your family.

His services has been terminated • His services have been terminated

I will follows your instruction. • I will follow your instructions.

The Kalidas is greater than any dramatist. • Kalidas is greater than any OTHER dramatist.

The whole India mourned on the death of YSR Reddy, CM of the AP.

• The whole of India mourned the death of YSR Reddy, CM of AP.

Kota is further from Bikaner then the Jaipur. • Kota is farther from Bikaner than Jaipur.

I does not like this kinds of jokes. • I do not like these kind of jokes.

The climate of Bikaner is as hot as Barmer. • The climate of Bikaner is as hot as that of Barmer.

Both Rishi & Goutam didn’t spoke. • Neither Rishi nor Goutam spoke.

Some persons are very coward. • Some persons are very cowardly.

Rishi was the most highest scorer last month in AFTERSCHOOOL’s performance appraisal system. • Rishi was the highest scorer last month in AFTERSCHOOOL’s performance appraisal system.

He gave a few coins he had to the beggar. • He gave the few coins he had to the beggar.

What is the last news about Ankit? • What is the latest news about Ankit?

No other student in AFTERSCHOOOL is more regular than swati • No other student in AFTERSCHOOOL is as regular as Swati

Narayana Murthy is the most industrious and the noblest person of our time. • Narayan Murthy is the noblest & most industrious person of our times.

Bill Gates is the first entrepreneur of 21st century. • Bill Gates is the foremost entrepreneur of 21st century.

Little knowledge of shoemaking proved utility to me • The Little knowledge of shoemaking proved useful to me

All afterschooolians have to prepare not less than 100 case studies. • All afterschooolians have to prepare not fewer than 100 case studies.

This is the most perfect system we can find ever. • This is the perfect system we can ever find.

Mukesh Ambani is wiser than honest. • Mukesh Ambani is more wise than honest.

Aishwarya Rai Bachhan is both beautiful as well as intelligent • Aishwarya Rai Bachhan is both beautiful and intelligent • OR • Aishwarya Rai Bachhan is beautiful as well as intelligent

LESS BOOKS ARE NEED FOR LIBRARY • FEWER BOOKS ARE NEEDED FOR THE LIBRARY

OF MUMBAI, DELHI AND BIKANER, THE LATEST HAS THE LARGEST NUMBER OF POLLUTING AUTORIKSHAS • OF MUMBAI, DELHI AND BIKANER, THE LAST HAS THE LARGEST NUMBER OF POLLUTING AUTORIKSHAS

RISHI & GAUTAM HELPED ONE ANOTHER. • RISHI & GAUTAM HELPED EACH ANOTHER.

DIVIDE THIS APPLE AMONG ME AND HIM. • DIVIDE THIS APPLE BETWEEN HIM AND ME.

VASUNDHARA AND YOU HAVE WASTED HIS TIME. • YOU AND VASUNDHARA HAVE WASTED YOUR TIME.

THIS IS THE PERSON, WHOSE ALL DAUGHTERS ARE ENTREPRENEURS • THIS IS THE PERSON, ALL DAUGHTERS OF WHOSE ARE ENTREPRENEURS.

SUCH BOYS WHO SHIRK WORK HARD SUCCEEDED IN LIFE • SUCH BOYS AS SHIRK WORK HARDLY SUCCEED IN LIFE

ABOUT AFTERSCHO☺OL Afterschoool conducts three year integrated PGPSE (after class 12th along with IAS / CA / CS) and 18 month PGPSE (Post Graduate Programme in Social Entrepreneurship) along with preparation for CS / CFP / CFA /CMA / FRM. This course is also available online also. It also conducts workshops on social entrepreneurship in schools and colleges all over India – start social entrepreneurship club in your institution today with the help from afterschoool and help us in developing society.

Why such a programme? • To promote people to take up entrepreneurship and help develop the society • To enable people to take up franchising and other such options to start a business / social development project • To enable people to take up social development as their mission • To enable people to promote spirituality and positive thinking in the world

Who are our supporters? • Afterschoolians, our past beneficiaries, entrepreneurs and social entrepreneurs are supporting us. • You can also support us – not necessarily by money – but by being promotor of our concept and our ideas.

About AFTERSCHO☺OL PGPSE – the best programme for developing great entrepreneurs • • • • •

Most flexible, adaptive but rigorous programme Available in distance learning mode Case study focused- latest cases Industry oriented practical curriculum Designed to make you entrepreneurs – not just an employee • Option to take up part time job – so earn while you learn • The only absolutely free course on internet

Workshops from AFTERSCHO☺OL • • • • • • • • •

IIF, Delhi CIPS, Jaipur ICSI Hyderabad Branch Gyan Vihar, Jaipur Apex Institute of Management, Jaipur Aravali Institute of Management, Jodhpur Xavier Institute of Management, Bhubaneshwar Pacific Institute, Udaipur Engineering College, Hyderabad

Flexible Specialisations: • • • • • • • • • •

Spiritualising business and society Rural development and transformation HRD and Education, Social Development NGO and voluntary work Investment analysis,microfinance and inclusion Retail sector, BPO, KPO Accounting & Information system (with CA / CS /CMA) Hospital management and Health care Hospitality sector and culture and heritage Other sectors of high growth, high technology and social relevance

Salient features: • The only programme of its kind (in the whole world) • No publicity and low profile course • For those who want to achieve success in life – not just a degree • Flexible – you may stay for a month and continue the rest of the education by distance mode. / you may attend weekend classes • Scholarships for those from poor economic background • Latest and constantly changing curriculum – keeping pace with the time • Placement for those who are interested • Admissions open throughout the year • Latest and most advanced technologies, books and study material

Components • • • • • • • • • • • • • •

Pedagogy curriculum and approach based on IIM Ahmedabad and ISB Hyderabad (the founder is alumnus from IIMA & ISB Hyderabad) Meditation, spiritualisation, and self development EsGotitial softwares for business Business plan, Research projects Participation in conferences / seminars Workshops on leadership, team building etc. Written submissions of research projects/articles / papers Interview of entrepreneurs, writing biographies of entrepreneurs Editing of journals / newsletters Consultancy / research projects Assignments, communication skill workshops Participation in conferences and seminars Group discussions, mock interviews, self development diaryng Mind Power Training & writing workshop (by Dr. T.K.Jain)

Pedagogy • • • • • • • • •

Case analysis, Articles from Harvard Business Review Quiz, seminars, workshops, games, Visits to entrepreneurs and industrial visits PreGotitations, Latest audio-visuals Group discussions and group projects Periodic self assessment Mentoring and counselling Study exchange programme (with institutions out of India) • Rural development / Social welfare projects

Branches • AFTERSCHO☺OL will shortly open its branches in important cities in India including Delhi, Kota, Mumbai, Gurgaon and other important cities. Afterschooolians will be responsible for managing and developing these branches – and for promoting social entrepreneurs.

Case Studies • We want to write case studies on social entrepreneurs, first generation entrepreneurs, ethical entrepreneurs. Please help us in this process. Help us to be in touch with entrepreneurs, so that we may develop entrepreneurs.

Basic values at AFTERSCHO☺OL • • • • • •

Share to learn more Interact to develop yourself Fear is your worst enemy Make mistakes to learn Study & discuss in a group Criticism is the healthy route to mutual support and help • Ask fundamental questions : why, when, how & where? • Embrace change – and compete with yourself only

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