Week 9 Study Guide Lecture

Week 9 – Lecture A. Expected Learning Outcomes of the Lesson By the end of this lesson, students will be able to:  Revise their essay so that their sentences use a consistent point of view, specific words, active words, concise words, and a variety of sentence structures.  Edit their essay for accuracy.  Revise their essay for unity, coherence, support and sentence skills.

B. Suggested Learning Activities for Lecture 9  Mini-Presentation List E (Group 4)  Textbook Exercises in Revising and Editing (Unit 3, Ch 6): o Consistency with Verbs – Activity 2, pp.232-233 (Complete at least 1 question.) o Consistency with Pronouns – Activity 3, pp.234-235 (Complete at least 1 question.) o Using Specific Words – Activity 4-5, pp.236-237 (Complete at least 1 question.) o Using Active Verbs - Activity 6, pp.239 (Complete at least 1 question.) o Using Concise Words - Activity 7, pp.240-241 (Complete at least 1 question.) o Varying Your Sentences ƒ Activity 8, pp.242-243 (Complete at least 1 question.) ƒ Activity 9, pp.244-245 (Complete at least 1 question.) ƒ Activity 10, pp.246-247 (Complete at least 1 question.) ƒ Activity 11, pp.247-248 (Complete at least 1 question.) o Proofreading Exercise: Activity 12, pp.250-251  Textbook Exercises in Revising for Four Bases of Writing (Unit 3, Ch 7): o Activity 12, pp.287-290 (Analyse either Essay 1 or 2.)

C. Supplementary Learning Activities  Textbook Exercises (Unit 3, Ch 6): o Consistency with Verbs ƒ Activity 2, pp.232 (Complete the rest of the questions.) ƒ Review Test 3, pp.253-254 o Consistency with Pronouns ƒ Activity 3, pp.234-235 (Complete the rest of the questions.) ƒ Review Test 4, pp.254-255 o Using Specific Words ƒ Activity 4-5, pp.236-237 (Complete the rest of the questions.) ƒ Review Test 5-6, pp.255-257 o Using Active Verbs ƒ Activity 6, pp.239 (Complete the rest of the questions.) C C204 0 E ng lis h for Acad e mi c S t udie s ( He al th Ca re) – S tudy Guid e

ƒ Review Test 7, pp.257-258 o Using Concise Words ƒ Activity 7, pp.240-241 (Complete the rest of the questions.) ƒ Review Test 8-9, pp.258-259 o Varying Your Sentences (Complete the rest of the questions.) ƒ Activity 8, pp.242-243 ƒ Activity 9, pp.244-245 ƒ Activity 10, pp.246-247 ƒ Activity 11, pp.247-248 ƒ Review Test 10-12, pp.259-262  Textbook Exercises in Revising for 4 Bases of Writing (Unit 3, Ch 7): o Base 1: Unity ƒ Activity 1-2, pp.264-267 ƒ Activity 9, pp.278-282 o Base 2: Support ƒ Activity 3, pp.268-271 ƒ Activity 10, pp.282-284 o Base 3: Coherence ƒ Activity 4-5, pp.271-275 ƒ Activity 11, pp.284-287 o Base 4: Sentence Skills ƒ Activity 7, pp.274-278; ƒ Activity 12, pp.287-290 (Complete the rest of the questions)

D. Useful Resources  Online Revision Practices at Companion Website (CWSR) http://highered.mcgrawhill.com/sites/0073384089/student_view0/index.html o i) Ch 6, Interactive Exercises Æ Reviewing the Four Bases o ii) Ch 6, Writing On- and Offline

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