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Review No 2

The author on several occasions fails to provide references to support claims made in the article. Examples of these oversights include comments such as: “Many experts”; “some critics”; and “Opponents of the peace process”. However in these examples the author fails to provide references thus making it difficult to establish the source of the information. The article includes sections on: history and ideology; kidnapping and Acts of Terror;Drug rafficiking; Plan Colomboia and Uribe’s Crackdown; and Making a Deal for Peace. The majority of the information has been repeate A positive for the author is that many of the claims made have been referenced to various authors, experts, or to other website thus permitting a collaboration and supporting documentation.