‘Writing to inspire, entertain, and move your readers’ Task: Write
a
short
story
or
piece
of
personal
writing
on
the
theme
‘A
Journey’ Length:
500
words
(maximum)
th Due date:
March
12
Your
writing
should
be
engaging,
imaginative
and
unique.
It
needs
a
clear
structure.
Readers
should
be
able
to
relate
to
your
characters,
imagine
your
setting
and
be
moved
by
your
writing.
Experiment
with
language
–
make
it
sophisticated,
precise
and
exciting.
We
look
forward
to
reading
your
‘journeys’.
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10
7
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8
Ideas
Structures
My
work
is
purposefully
organized
and
structured
Imagination
and
depth
of
thought
are
clearly
evident
in
my
work
I
used
paragraphs
highly
effectively,
showing
an
My
work
is
engaging
and
I
excellent
understanding
of
have
taken
risks
to
make
it
the
narrative
form
unique
I
have
used
a
variety
of
sentence
types
and
styles
to
achieve
stylistic
effects.
Style and Language
My
style
and
language
achieve
a
desired
effect
Overall,
my
language
was
accurate
and
read
very
smoothly
I
used
a
tone
and
voice
that
added
to
the
impact
of
my
writing
I
understand,
and
have
shown,
that
punctuation
can
be
used
as
an
element
of
style
My
work
is
organized
and
My
style
and
language
were
structured
appropriate
to
the
task
Imagination
and
thought
are
I
used
paragraphs
effectively,
Errors
in
spelling,
evident
in
my
work
showing
a
clear
punctuation
and
word
use
understanding
of
the
are
infrequent
and
never
My
work
is
engaging
and
I
narrative
form
impede
understanding.
have
taken
some
risks
to
make
it
unique
I
have
used
a
variety
of
I
use
an
effective
tone
and
sentence
types
and
styles.
voice
I
have
used
punctuation
correctly
throughout
my
narrative.
5
‐
6
My
work
is
organized
and
structured
Imagination
is
evident
in
my
work
I
used
paragraphs,
showing
a
reasonable
understanding
of
My
work
is
generally
the
narrative
form
engaging
I
attempt
to
use
a
variety
of
sentence
types
3
‐
4
My
ideas
show
a
basic
understanding
of
the
task
My
work
is
somewhat
engaging
1
‐
2
My
ideas
showed
a
limited
understanding
of
the
task
Student
Teacher
My
style
and
language
were
mostly
appropriate
to
the
task
There
are
a
few
errors
in
spelling,
punctuation
and
word‐use
I
use
a
consistent
tone
and
voice
Most
of
my
punctuation
is
accurate
My
use
of
language
and
style
is
not
always
effective
There
are
regular
errors
in
spelling
and
punctuation
I
have
attempted
to
use
tone
and
voice
in
my
writing
I
attempt
to
organize
my
work
but
some
aspects
needs
improving
I
use
basic
paragraphs
I
use
basic
sentences
accurately
My
use
of
punctuation
is
often
inaccurate
I
was
unsuccessful
with
There
are
significant
organizing
my
work
weaknesses
with
the
style
and
language
I
have
used
I
consistently
did
not
use
sentences
and
paragraphs
Errors
significantly
impede
correctly
understanding
Student
comments:
Teacher
comments:
Parent
signature
and
optional
comment: