Cr Wp3 Zobel Peer Feedback Form 3

Zobel/Eng 1A WP #3 Peer Feedback 3 Author's Name:

Peer Reviewer's Name:

General impressions of Paper: What is the author's claim? Are you convinced? Does author seem interested in topic? Why or why not? Give support for your point! How are transitions between the body paragraphs? Is the paper focused? Does it wander? When & where does it wander? Is there a rebuttal or refutation? Is it effective? How could it be improved? INTRODUCTION Does the introduction grab you? How could it do so?

Is there a smooth transition into the first body paragraph? Why does it work well, or what would improve it?

QUOTES Locate a quote used by the author. Identify it by paragraph # and person quoted. How long is it? How does it support the topic sentence for the paragraph? Is this made clear in the paragraph? How does it support the thesis/claim? Is this made clear in the paragraph? Does the author make these links in a convincing way?