1 .ClSJ.zEr de Lune"
FADE IN:
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EXT. ENTERPRISE FULL SHOT ORBITINGPLANE:r
LATE .A.Jrn:RNOON
KIRK (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate
8106.4.
The
Enterprise has been ordered by Starfleet Commandto explore the new planet Kismet IV. Due to complications from our last mission, the transporter is inoperative and under repair. !NT. ENTERPRISE LONG SHOT
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-
SHU'l'TLECRAFT HANGER DECK
SHUTTLECR.A.Fr
as the hanger doors begin to open and the shuttlecraft out of the ship into space.
begins to move
KIRK (cont'd V.O.)
I've decided to send Mr. Spock and Doctor McCoyin a well equipped shuttle craft to make a routine investigation of the planet.
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EXT. SHUTTLECR.A.Fr
SPACE
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APrER
LAUNCH.
!NT. SHUTTLECRAFT ... LATE .A.Jrn:RNOON We see MR. SPOCKand DOCTORLEONARDMCCOYsitting
shuttl ecraft
,
a smallexploring
craft
at the front
with a control
console,
of the
seven
passenger seats, and a view screen at the front above the console. SPOCKis the science officer and second in command of the Enterprise. Half Vulcan and half human, SPOCKis from the planet Vulcan. He has pointed ears, green blood, dark hair, a somewhat satanic look, and an unemotional, logical demeanor. MCCOYis the chief surgeon aboard the Enterprise. A Georgian gentleman, MCCOYis an emotionally spontaneous and deeply feeling man although he hides behind his sarcastic, cynical attitude at times. He has brown hair, blue eyes, and he is in his forties. SPOCKand MCCOYare friends but something like a "feud" exists between them because SPOOKis guided by logic and MCCOYis guided by emotion. Both are about to land on Kismet IV to begin their investigation. MED. SHOT
-
SPOCK
.AND MCCOY
SPOCKflips a button and the viewing screen opens to show the plaaet ahead. SPOCKpeers into his round, viewing scanner at...the console. MCCOYsits beside SPOCK, observing the view screen. . .
2 CONTINUED:
MCCOY Spock, does Starfleet know anything at all about this planet? SPOOK
Negative, uncharted
Doctor. The planet and unexplored.
is
MCCOY Well, I guess we have the honors, don't we. MCCOYleans back comfortable into his viewer.
in his
What do your
scanners
chair
MCCOY
and SPOCKoontinues
(cont'd) show?
SPOOK OXYgen, nitrogen atmosphere. Indications of desert terrain. MCCOY
I wonder what kind of life on this planet?
forms exist
SPOCK Unknown, Doctor. At present, are no life form readings. MCCOYlooks
at SPOCKwith
a sly gleam in his
there eyes.
MCCOY Well, if we do find any intelligent beings, we better approach them slowly. SPOCK Why, Doctor? MCCOY
Once they take a good look at those pointed ears of yours they may think twice about getting to know us. CLOSE SHOT
as he looks
-
SPOCK
at MCCOYand raises
his
eyebrow.
SPOCK Really, Doctor. Your overexuberant emotionalism would probably cause the same effect. . .
to look
3 CONTINUED:
A BEEP from the console is HEABDbefore SPOOKflips a switch on.
MCCOYcan get in another
SPOOK
Spock here. KIRK'S VOICE
Well, Spock, Bones, how are you two enjoying the ride? MCCOY
Jim, I'ss never forgive you for sending me out here by DlY'self with a computer. SPOOKlooks
at MCCOYand then
turns
away a.ga.in.
SPOOK
There's been no complications yet, Captain.
as of
KIRK'S VOICE
I trust you two will be on your best behavior with each other. MCCOY
Don't worry Jim. I'll keep spock in line. If he doesn't behave, I'll sedate him. CLOSE SHOT
-
SPOOK
as he gives MCCOY a feisned
look of irritation.
KIRK'S VOICE (jokingly) I heard that, Bones. If Starfleet wants a thorough investigation of this planet, that's what we'll give them. Why' didn't
MCCOY you tag along,
Jim?
KIRK'S VOICE
Come on, Bone8. You know you two are the best men for the job. Besides, we have our own problems up here. Captain, point.
SPOOK we're approaching . .
our landing
word.
4 CONTINUED:
KIRK'S VOICE
Very good, Mr. Spook. I want you two to oontaot me at least every two hours to report on your progress. SPOOK Captain.
Aoknowledged,
KIRK'S VOICE you two. Kirk out.
:Be oareful
SPOCKfl'ips the &witoh off, looks at the oontrols, and begins to make some adjustments. CAMERAFOLLOWSMCCOYas he gets up and walks to the baok of the shuttleoraft to oheok the life soienoe equipment they brought with them. As MCCOYbends over the equipment, he stops suddenly as if he feels dizzy. He puts his hand to his head, dazed for a moment. He turns around toward SPOCK. MCCOY
,I
(questioning)
Spook...
MCCOY doesn't have the ohanoe to say any more. violently, and MCCOY is thrown to the floor. MED. SHOT
-
The shuttleoraft
lurohes
SPOCK
as he is thrown to the floor and shake.
too.
The shuttleoraft
oontinues
to luroh
ANOTHERANGLE
MCCOYmakes it baok to his oontrol of the shuttleoraft.
What's
SPOOKlooks
into
his
seat
happening,
at the front,
and SPOCKtries
to regain
MCCOY Spook?
soanner.
Something oontrols.
SPOOK is interfering
with
the
MCCOY
From the planet? SPOCK
Affimati Another violent luroh wall into eaoh other.
ve. oauses
SPOOKand MCCOYto be thrown against ..
the
5 CONTINUED:
MCCOY
We'~~ttodos~etM~! SPOCK There's little we can do. controls are respondi~.
SPOCKlooks
into
None
of the
his scannersagain. SPOCK (cont'd)
I'm getting The shuttlecraft
lurches
eratic, again.
magnetic readings. SPOCKflips
on a switch at the console.
SPOCK(cont'd) Spook to Enterprise, come in. (silence) Spock to Enterprise, emergency. (silence) MCCOY What's wrong? SPOCK are ineffective.
Communications
What are we ~ing
MCCOY to do?
SPOOK Prepare for emergency procedures, Doctor. MCCOY ~ing to crash?
You mean we're Yes, Doctor. CLOSE SHOT-
as he gives
SPOCK We're ~ing
down.
MCCOY
SPOCKa worried
MED. TWO SHOT
-
look.
SPOCK AND MCCOY
as they are thrown to the floor
again from the violent
lurching.
FADEOUT.
THEME MUSIC, TITLES
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6 CONTINUED:
FADE IN:
!NT. ENTERPRISE
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FULL SHOT OF BRIDGE
-
LATE APl'ERNOON
The bridge crew are at their stations. CAPlAIN JAMIDST. KIRK is sitting in his command chair in the center of the bridge. KIRK is captain of the Starship Enterprise. He is a good looking, strong leader figure in his thirties with brown hair and of medium heigth. The bridge is in the round with two stations at the console in front of the captain's chair for the oriental helmsman, MR. SUtU, and the young Russian navigator, MR. CHEKOV. On the upper level of the bridge is SPOOK'S science station to the left, the
communications station behind KIRK for the black communications UHURA, and the egineering station to the right for the officer, Scottish
engineer,
MIm. TWO SHOT
-
MR. SCOTT. All but SCOft are present. sUtU AND CHEKOV
si tting at their console in front view scanner beside him.
of KIRK. SUtU peers into his
SULU Captain, I'm getting a very strong magnetic reading. KIRK Source? SULU From the planet, sir. KIRK That's strange. We weren' t getting readings like that before. CLOSE SHOT
- KIRK
as he looks intently
ahead at the screen.
KIRK (cont'd) Mr. Chekov, take over Spock' s scanners. CHEKOV
Aye, Captain. CAMERAFOLLOWS CHEKOV as
station
he gets up and goes to SPOOK'S science
and looks into the scanners.
KIRK(O.S.) Readings, Mr. Chekov. ..
1 CONTINUED:
CHEKOV
Confirmed, Captain. Defini tely a maenetic flux emanating from the planet. ANGLE
- SULU Captain, readings mass being pulled atmosphere.
KIRK leans forward in his chair ANGLE
SULU indicate a metallic into the planet's concerned.
- KIRK KIRK (intensely) The shuttlecraft. Get a fix on it, Mr. Chekov.
KIRKpushes a button
on his chair.
KIRK (cont'd) Kirk to Spock, come in. Can you read me Spock, can you read me. Come in. We HEARSTATIC over the speaker.
KIRK turns
to tJHO'RAat communications.
nmc (cont'd) Lieutenant, try to reestablish communications. tJHO'RA
I've already tried sir. response on any channel.
There's
no
KIRK turns back around in his chair. Damn. Report,
KIRK Mr. Chekov. CHEKOV
Sir, the shuttlecraft seems to have grounded. It appears to have crash landed. KIRK (hesitantly) Are they still alive? ..
8 CONTINUED:
CHEICOV
Yes, Captain. I'm picking life form readings.
up two
Anything,
KIRK Lieutenant Uhura?
Negative,
Captain,
UHURA
still
no response.
KIRKpushes another button on his chair. KIRK Kirk to transporter room. SCOTT'S VOICE
Scott here, Scotty, working
sir.
KIRK we need those transporters
.
SCOTT'S VOICE
Captain,
they're
uner repair.
KIRK We have an
I know, Scotty. emergency. What happened
still
SCOTT'S VOICE sir?
KIRK It's Spock and McCoy. They crashed on the planet. We've lost communications with them. (forcefully) We've got to get those transporters working !!2!:. SCOTT'S VOICE
Captain, we're working as fast can. Damage is extensive.
as we
KIRK I know, Scotty. I'm sorry. I'm worried about them. For all we know they could be injured, or dying (pause) Estimated repair time, Scotty? ..
9 CONTINUED:
SCOTT'S VOICE
I would say twenty hours at the least. KIRK (with disbelief) Twenty hours... Alright, continue repairs, Scotty, and get another crew down there to help. SCOTT'S VOICE
Aye aye, sir.
Scott out.
ANOTHERANGLE
SULU turns
toward
the Captain.
SULU Captain, what about sending out another shuttlecraft? KIRK It's too risky. The same thing would probably happen and then we'd have two landing parties down without communication. MED. SHOT
- KIRK
As he sits
back in his chair with a worried look on his face. KIRK (cont'd)
Looks like we have our hands tied. Continue scanning Mr. Chekov. Keep me informed of any changes. !NT.
SHUTTLECRAFT
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LATE
AFTERNOON
CAMERAis CLOSEUP on SPOCKas he begins up slowly, holding his head.
to stir
on the
floor.
He sits
ANOTHERANGLE
SPOCKlooks around him at the shuttlecraft which is in disa.rr87. He 8ee8 MCCOY lying near by unconscious. CAMEBA~FOLLOWS SPOCKas he gets up and goes over to MCCOY,lfueels down, and gently shakes him on the shoulder to wake him up. SPOCK
McCop... CLOSE SHOT
-
MCCOY
a.s hi! awakens and slowly
si is up by SPOCK.
10 CONTINUED:
MI!ID. SHOT
-
SPOOK AND MCCOY SPOOK
Are you alright,
Doctor? MCCOY
Dizzy... MCCOYshakes his head, in one of the chairs. and opens it.
and SPOOKhelps him get up and sits him down SPOOKtakes MCCOY'Smedikit from the floor
What in blazes
MCCOY is going
on?
SPOOK
Calm yourself, Doctor. Your emotional reaction to this situation will not help matters. MCCOY
Don't give me any Vulcan logic, Spock. I just want to know what happened. Unknown at this SPOOKbegins
SPOOK time, Doctor.
to check MCCOYover with the medical
scanner.
MCCOY What do you mean you don't know? You're the science officer...
SPOOK (irritated) Doctor, we have just crash landed on an unexplored planet, we've lost communication with the Enterprise, both of us have only been conscious for the last few minutes, and I am now attempting to evaluate your physical condition. I have not had the opportunity to evaluate the situation as of yet. Does that clarify the situation? Alright,
you've
MCCOY made your point.
SPOOKcontinues again to run the medical scanner, over MCCOYand takes a reading. After examining MCCOY,he closes the mediki t.
..
11 CONTINUED:
SPOOK you have sustainedno Fortunately, major injuries, Doctor, except for a few...
SPOOK reaches out and touches MCCOY'Sside. ...bruised
ribs. SPOOK
MCCOYflinches
in pain.
(cont'd)
MCCOY Are you alright, Spock?
SPOOK Yes, CAMERA
FOLLOWS
SPOOK
I'm uninjured.
as he gets up and goes to the front console.
flips on a switch in an attempt
He
to call the ship.
SPOOK Spock to Enterprise. (silence) Spock to Enterprise, (silence) CLOSE SHOT
-
come in.
MCCOY'S CONCERNEDFACE
CAMERA FOLLOWS
SPOCK
as he flips off the awitch, goes to the back of
the shuttlecraft, and opens a compartment. He takes out two phasers, two communicators, and two tricorders, and walks back over to MCCOY.
SPOOK I suggest we proceed outside, Doctor, and make some general observations. Are you well enoughT MCCOY Don't worry about me, Spock. doctor around here. SPOOK hands MCCOY his shuttlecraft.
EXT. SHUTTLECRAFT
-
I'm the
equipment, and they move to the door of the
FULL SHOT
-
LATE AFl'ERNOON
SPOOKand MCCOYcome out of the shuttlecraft and look around. CAMERA PANS over the land in the immediate area. The terrain is very flat anddrybut with trees growing in abundance. MED. TWO SHOT
-
SPOOK AND MCCOY
. .
12 CONTINUED:
SPOOK
Doctor, scout out the immediate area and take some tricorder readings. I shall attempt to ascertain how badly damaged the shutt1ecraft is. Stay in constant communication. MCCOYacknowledges FOLLOWS SPOOK
compartment,
silently
and walks
off
out of the
CAMERA. CAMERA
as he walks to the back of the shutt1ecra£t,
and begins
his
opens a
examination. DISSOLVE TO:
-
EXT. PLANm"S SURFACE LATE .AftERNOON LONG SHOT -
MCCOY
as he walks toward CAMERA and under some huge trees. He comes upon some native plants in the foreground and CAMERA TILTS DOWN as he kneels down to take some readings. He looks puzzled as he stands back up again. CLOSE SHOT
-
MCCOY
as he looks around him concerned. something. MCCOY'SP.O. V.
-
He gazes up at the sky and sees
ORANGEMOONOF ICIS~
IV
The moon is on the horizon and slowly beginning strong. MED. SHOT
-
to rise.
It's
glow is
MCCOY
MCCOYlooks concerned. and opens it.
He HEARSa BEEP, pulls
out his
MCCOY
McCoy here. Report,
Doctor.SPOCK'S
VOICE
MCCOY
There's not a lot to report Mr. Spock.
on,
SPOOK'S VOICE
Explain. MCCOY
Well, all I.c.an see for miles around is flat terrain and trees.
communicator,
13 CONTINUED:
SPOOK Anything
else?
MCCOY I,tound some native plants but nothing substantial.
Well, CUT TO SPOOK
SPOOK
Lite
torms?
None.
MCCOY'S VOICE like this planet's
It's
deserted.
SPOCK
That's
very odd. MCCOY'S VOICE
Yea, I know. shuttlecratt?
What about the
SPOOK Some ot the electrical circuits are tusedand burned. Evidently the magnetic tlux I was picking up on the scanners earlier caused the damage. CUT TO MCCOY MCCOY
Can you tix
it? SPOOK'S VOICE
Possibly, but it will have to wait until morning. It's near dark. Any luck
in
MCCOY contacting the
ship?
SPOOK'S VOICE
Negative,
Doctor.
I suggest
that you...
SPOOKstops talking abruptly. MCCOYHEARSa subtle CRY trom SPOOK as it something is wrong. MCCOYbegins to be concerned. MCCOY Spock?
Spock,
(silence) are you alright? . .
14 CONTINUED:
SPOCK'S VOICE
(unnatural) I suggest that you return to the shuttlecraft before it gets dark. Spock,
MCCOY something wrong?
is
SPOCK'S VOICE
Negative. MCCOYhesitates CLOSE SHOT
-
as if
he doesn't
belive
SPOCK.
MCCOY'S CONCERNEDFACE MCCOY
I'm on my way. McCoyout. MCCOY closes his communicator and starts camp and away from the C.AMB:RA.
to quickly walk back toward DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. SHUTTLEClW'J! MED. SHOT
-
-
NEAR DUSK
SPOCK
SPOCKis still at the back of the shuttlecraft trying to repair the damage. MCCOYENTERS the scene walking up to SPOCK. SPOCKturns around to face him. MCCOYeyes SPOCKintently and with worry in his eyes. Is
something
You tell
SPOCK wrong, Doctor?
MCCOY me, Spock. SPOCK
I do not understand. MCCOY Something was wrong with you earlier when you contacted me, and I want to know what it is.
SPOOK I assure you, Doctor, I'm perfectly fine. MCCOY
That's bu11t .Spock. Don't give me that. I knQw.you, and I know when eromething's not right.
15 CONTINUED:
CLOSE SHOT
-
SPOOK
as he looks at MCCOY silently trying to control something under the SPOOK is making very subtle flinching gestures in his surface.
face.
He begins to turn away from
grabs SPOOK'S arm, holding ANOTHER
ANGLE
-
SPOOK
MCCOY.
MCCOY reaches out and
him back.
AND MCCOY
MCCOY Why won't
Spock?
you tell me what's
wrong,
Are you in pain?
answer MCCOY. He pulls away and walks toward the door, ignoring MCCOY'Squestion.; CAMERA FOLLOWSSPOOK.
SPOOKwon't shuttlecraft
SPOOK It's time we retired for the night. We'll continue aur investigations in the morning.
As SPOOKreaches the door, he stops suddenly. He leansagainst the shuttlecraft, grabs his head, and then drops to his knees in a cry of pain. FADEOUT.
FADE IN.
-
EXT. SRUTTLECRAFl' SAME SCENE MED. SHOT
-
-
NEAR DUSK
SPOOK AND MCCOY
MCCOYimmediately
comes to SPOOK'S sile and kneels
grabs SPOOK'Sshoulders Spock,
trying what
is
to offer
down by him.
support.
MCCOY What's wrong? it?
All MCCOYgets for an answer is another SUBTLECRY of pain from SPOOK. MCCOYpulls out his medical scanner and tricorder to take a reading.
MCCOY (cont'd) (surprised) What the... Spock, all my tricorder is registering is a high magnetic reading. . .
MCCOY
16 CONTINUED:
SPOCK (in pain) I'm aware of that, Doctor. I can feel it. It's coming from the ground.
MCCOYcontinues
scanning. MCCOY You're right, Spock. It.!! coming from the ground. There's something
in this
soil...
something's
reacting
with it to cause the magnetic flus. (questioning)
:But what?
Doctor. points
SPOCK
SPOCK (in pain) . .
and MCCOY looks where he is pointing. SPOCK
That's THEIR
P. O. V.
- ORANGE
The moon is higher MED.
TWO SHOT
-
(cont' d)
the source. {fLOWING
MOON
in the sky now.
SPOCK .AND MCCOY
MCCOY You mean the moon is reacting with the soil? SPOCK (strained) Yes, I felt it begin some time ago when the moon first rose above the
horizon. MCCOY
you tell me?
Why didn't
SPOCK I thought
(in pain) I could control
to it. MCCOY Why haven't
I noticed
..
it?
my reaction
17 CONTINUED:
SPOOK (strained) I'm a te1epath, Doctor. What
does
MCCOY have to
that
do with
it?
SPOCK (strained) IV brain waves are more sensitive, higher in amplitude than yours. takes longer for you to feel the effect. MCCOY (angrily) Now you tell me. You should told me before, Spock. MCCOYEiba1Ceshis
head for
a moment as if
It
have
dazed.
Night has fallen.
MCCOY Come to think of it, I felt dizzy for a moment right before we lost control of the shutt1ecraft. I'm beginning to feel that w~ again. MCCOYputs
LONG SHOT
as a green,
his
-
hand to his I can't
head. MCCOY(cont'd) straight.
think
SPOCK AND MCCOY
magnetic current
begins to form on the surface
MCCOY (cont'd) Spock, we've got to get inside shuttlecraft .!!2!!.
ot the soil.
the
ANOTHERANGLE
MCCOYhelps SPOCKstand DOCTORfor support.
up, but SPOCKstops
MCCOY,holding
SPOCK (strained) No, Doctor. That won't do any good. We have to get up, above the ground, to lessen the effect of the static. ..
on to the
18 CONTINUED:
MCCOY
How? SPOCK
trees...
One of the
SPOCKpegins to fall down again, his shoulder to hold him up.
and MCCOY puts SPOCK'Sarm around DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. PLANET'S FLAT TERRAIN MED. SHOT
-
-
NIGHT
SPOCK AND MCCOY
as they walk in the midst of the huge trees. supporting SPOCK. They stop and up at the trees. MCCOY'S P.O.V.
for
MCOOY is still a moment, and MCCOYlooks around
- A HUGE NEST - AT TOP OF TREE.
BACK TO SHOT, MCCOY
Can you climb,
Spock?
SPOCK acknowledges silently, and MCCOYand SPOCKgo to the huge tree and begin to climb the thorny bzanches. SERIES OF SHOTS
as SPOCKand MCCOY climb the tree. They pull and push each other up until they reach the top. MCCOY reaches the nest first. He reaches down over the nest. Spock,
MCCOY grab my hand.
SPOCKgrabs MCCOY'Shand. of the way into the nest.
deserted.
Feathers
pieces
of brush
deeply
divided
MCCOYGROANSas he pulls SPOCKup the rest The nest is huge, in dis~y, and
are scattered
and loose
trunk.
sticks.
MCCOYputs
on the bottom along with other The nest
his
is situated
hands to his
between
a
heM.
MCCOY(cont'd)
Myhead...
as he crawls over to the other side of the nest and wraps his arms around a thick limb. He is tremblingand in pain. CAMERAFOLLOWS SPOCK
ANOTHER ANGLE
. .
1~ CONTINUED:
We made
MCCOY
it.
Is it
(cont'd)
better
up here,
Spock? CLOSE SHOT
-
SPOCK SPOCK
(to himself) I am a Vulcan. There is no pain. I am in control. SPOCKGROANSagain
from the pain. SPOCK (cont'd)
No... CLOSE SHOT
-
MCCOY
MCCOYis in pain too. He looks at SPOCKwith deep concern. Forcing himself to get up, he moves over to SPOCKas CAMERA FOLLOWShim. MCCOYtouches SPOCKon the arm, and SPOCKflinches in pain. MCCOY is startled for a moment and then looks at the arm. CLOSE SHOT
-
:BACK TO SHOT
SPOCK'S ARM WITH A GASH :BLEEDING GREEN :BLOOD
-
SPOCK AND MCCOY MCCOY
Sorry, Spock. hurt you.
I didn't
MCCOY takes out his mediki t and quickly dressing. SPOCKcontinues to tremble. Dammit, MCCOYcloses of the area.
his
I can't
mean to fixes
the wound with a spray
MCCOY(cont' d) think.
mediki t and then takes
another
tricorder
reading
MCCOY (cont'd) The readings are stronger, but we're off the ground. The effect should be lessened. CLOSE SHOT
as he turns eyes.
-
SPOCK
his
face
toward MCCOYwith
:BACKTO SHOT . .
a scared,
pained
look in his
20
MCCOY Spock, I don't know how to help you. Tell me. SPOOK (in pain) You can't...
MCCOY Would
it help if I sedated
you?
SPOOK
(forced) The...pain...is...endurable.
MCCOY There's got to be something I can do, Spock. I hate to see you suffer like this. (pause) Your own Vulcanness is destroying
you. SPOOK GROANS again.
checks
the tricorder
MCCOY puts his hand on SPOOK'Sshoulder again. MCCOY(cont' d) are up again, by four
The :iteadings points.
MCCOY looks over the lip of the nest at the
MCCOY'SP.O. V.
-
and
ground belovo
GREEN GLOWING CtJRREN'1'
as it dances over the top of the soil all around, more actively than before. ANOTHER ANGLE
-
m»OOK AND MCCOY
No wonder
MCCOY there's no life forms
on
this planet. MCCOY
turns back toward SPOOKand rubs his eyes. It's
MCCOY(cont' d) to me too, Spook.
getting
The pain... MCCOYsits down by SPOOKand rests over his knee.
his
head in the
crook of his
. . DISSOLVE TO:
arm
21 CONTINUED:
SAME SCENE
- LATER
CLOSE SHOT
-
ORANGE MOON HIGHER
-
MED. CLOSE SHOT as he slowly
IN SKY
MCCOY
awakens
from another
position.
A few hours
have past.
He shakes his head in a daze. We BEAR deep and pained BREATHING with subtle CRIES and GROANS of pain from SPOCl:. CAMERA WIDENS
to show SPOOKand MCCOY. MCCOY
Spock... MCCOYregains
another
composure, pulls out his tricorder and takes
his
reading. MCCOY(cont' d) are off the scale.
Damn, readings MCCOYputs
his hand to his head. MCCOY(cont' d) like somebody' s hi tUng my'head with a sledgehammer. It
MCCOYputs
down his
feels
tricorder
and begins to reach out to touch SPOOK.
SPOOK (forcefully) Don't touch me! MCCOY pulls back slightly in surprise. CLOSE SHOT
-
MCCOY
as he grimaces and grinds his palms to his forehead. MCCOY (strained)
Spock... Why? I'm trying CLOSE SHOT
-
to help you.
SPOOK
SPOOK (pleading)
Please...don't... MED. TWO SHOT
-
stay
SPOOK AND MCCOY
MCCOY
Why are you .doingthis?
away.
22
CONTINUED:
MCCOYreaches out and touohes SPOCKanyway, putting his hand on the Vuloan' s arm. SPOCKimmediately shoves MCCOYaway from him foroefully. ANOTHERANGLE
MCCOYgives a CRY as he topples over the lip to the edge, hanging on with all the strength Spook.. .help grip. Help!
MCCOY me! I'm losing
of the nest. he has left.
He olings
my
SPOCKforoes himself to orawl over to the edge of the nest. SPOCK reaoher down and pulls MCCOYbaok up into the nest. When SPOCK releases MCCOY,MCCOYCRIES OUT in pain and grabs his head. He begins to tremble.
SPOCK (foroed) Dootor, are you alright? MCCOYsits
up straighter,
still
holding
his
head.
MCCOY (slowly)
Yea...I'm...okay. MCCOYlooks
at SPOeK a.nli SPOCKlooks
at him.
MCCOY (oont'd) (gently): I understand why you didn't want me to touoh you, Spook. You don't have any mental oontrol anymore. SPOCKlooks down, holding his head. MCCOY (oont'd) When you grabbed my arm, I felt us mind meld. You oan't oontrol it, oan you? SPOCKlooks away with shame in his faoe. MCCOY (oont'd) Don't shut me out, Spook. I don't want to hurt you. I want to help you. SPOCK No... ..
23 CONTINUED:
MCCOY Spock, you don't have to hide from me. We're friends, remember? Please, let me help you. SPOCK I can't...
MCCOY It's not your fault. understand that?
Don't you
SPOCK Please, don't... MCCOY (forcefully) Blast your Vulcan pride! Don't you trust me? Doesn't our friendship mean anything to you? SPOCK slowly looks up at MCCOY. himself to speak.
After
a long pause,
SPOCK
SPOCK (forced) Yes...it does. You...m1ght help. MCCOY
sits up more
attentively
and leans toward
MCCOY How, Spock? Just tell me how. SPOCK Mind meld with me. MCCOY Again?
Is
it
dangerous?
SPOCK (forced)
Yes. MCCOY drops
his head again.
MCCOY I can't
think
straight,
SPOCK (in pain)
Nor I. ..
Spock.
SPOCK.
forces
24 CONTINUED:
MCCOY M;y'head is spinning. I'm so dizzy. (pause) Maybe we oan make it. Night's almost past. SPOCK (foroed)
No... SPOCKGROANSagain,.'in
pain
as he oontinues
to tremble.
SPOCK (oont'd) (foroed)
I...oan't...wait.
I...need...you...
MCCOY Spook. I'm really
I'm soared, soared.
SPOCK (foroed) I know, but together, oombined, are stronger.
CtOSE SHOT
-
MCCOY Are you sure, Spook? What if something goes wrong? SPOCK
as he drops his full of agony.
head into
his hands
Bones...Hold CLOSE SHOT
-
as it
with
fill
CLOSE SHOT
-
we
and gives
a deep MOANof pain
SPOCK me. Now, or not ever.
MCCOY'S FACE
deep oonoern
and worry for
SPOCK.
MCCOY AND IPOCK
as SPOCKfalls over with his head in his hands. MCCOYoatohes and holds him up by embraoing him. MCCOY'Seyes begin to fill. MCCOY (gently) Easy, Spook. We'll make it. I promise you. We' ii.&pull through together. . .
FADE OUT.
him
FURTHER OUTLINE FOR "CLAIRE DE LUNE"
I.
ONTHEENTERPRISE,THETRANSPORTER IS REPAIRED. KIRK EQUIPS A LANDING PARTY TO :BEAMDOWNTO THE PI..ANE1!.
II.
KIRK AND THE LANDING PARTY :BEAMDOWNAND SEARCH FOR SPOCK AND MCCOY. THEY FIND THEM PEACEFULLY RESTING AT THE TOP OF THE TREE.
III.
EVERYONE:BEAMS:BACKUP TO THE SHIP AND SPOCK AND MCCOYARE :BOTHGIVEN A FULL EXAMINATION.
IV.
STARFLEFJ.r COMMAND IS INFORMED THAT THE PLANm' KISMm' IV IS UNINHABITABLE, AND THE ENTERPRISE PROCEEDS ON ITS NEXT MISSION.
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