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ENGLISH IMPROVEMENT SENTENCE CORRECTION AFTERSCHOOOL – DEVELOPING CHANGE MAKERS CENTRE FOR SOCIAL ENTREPRENEURSHIP PGPSE PROGRAMME – World’ Most Comprehensive programme in social entrepreneurship & spiritual entrepreneurship OPEN FOR ALL FREE FOR ALL

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ENGLISH IMPROVEMENT Dr. T.K. Jain. AFTERSCHOOOL Centre for social entrepreneurship Bikaner M: 9414430763 [email protected] www.afterschool.tk www.afterschoool.tk www.afterschoool.tk

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CORRECT IT : his discourse about the meteorologist was very stimulating.  his

discourse concerning the meteorologist was very stimulating.

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CORRECT IT : until the sky is overcast, I take my raincoat with me.  whenever

the sky is overcast, I take my raincoat with me.

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The speaker tried to up the emotions of his audiences.  The

speaker tried to work up the emotions of his audience.

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One of my old friend has invited me for tea at the evening.  One

of my old friends has invited me on tea in the evening.

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There is no objection to him joining the party.  There

is no objection to his joining the

party.

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If I will be you, I will report matter at oncely.  If

I were you, I would report the matter at once.

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The sun was shined such bright that lalita has to put on her sunglass.  The

sun was shining so brightly that Lalita had to put on her sunglasses

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The lady laid out a special dinner to their husband on his birthday.  The

lady laid a special dinner to her husband on his birthday.

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Epidemics are likely to break off in the areas from where flood waters have receded.  Epidemics

are likely to break out in the areas from where flood water has receded.

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You are so young to go out alone.  You

are too young to go out alone.

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You don’t want a beggar to look happy, Isnt it?  The

general rule is that when we have a negative sentence, the question is positive and vice versa. Question should be as per the subject.  You don’t want a beggar to look happy, do you?

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The instructor told the student to hold the club lightly to kept his eye on the ball, but should not used to many force.  The

instructor told the student to hold the club lightly to keep his eye on the ball, and not to use too much force.

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Hardly did he saddle the horse then the mare broke loose and galloped down the hill.  Hardly

is always followed by had and

when.  Hardly had he saddle the horse when the mare broke loose and galloped down the hill.

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You may carry on my order.  You

must carry out my order.

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The boat drowned  The

boat was sunk.

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When describing the accident, he was in tear.  While

describing the accident, he was in

tears  OR  When

he was describing the accident, he was in tears.

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The 40 thieves distributed the loot between them.  The

40 thieves distributed the loot among themselves.

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The building will redocorate at summer time.  The

building will be redecorated during summer season.

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He don’t like me coming too late.  He

doesn’t like my coming so late.

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Of the two candidates, I think, he is the most best suited one.  Of

the two candidates, I think, he is the better one.

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You wont tell them what has happen, wouldn’t you?  You

won’t tell them what has happened, will you?

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The help give to us was more adequate for our purpose.  The

help given to us was more than adequate for our purpose.

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If you are absent for a week, you have to catch with the works when you returned back.  If

you are absent for a week, you have to catch up with the work when you return.

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There is an endless running of traffic on Bikaner – Jaipur road.  There

is an endless stream of traffic on Bikaner – Jaipur road.

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The climate of Delhi is somewhat like Bikaner.  The

climate of Delhi is somewhat like that of Bikaner.

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She don’t minded to be disturbed.  She

doesn’t mind being disturbed.

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It is high timed that you went home.  It

is high time that you should go home.

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We have many migratory workers coming from neighbour countries.  We

have many immigrant workers coming from neighboring countries.

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Neither I nor my friend live here.  Neither

do I nor does my friend live here.

 OR  Neither

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I nor my friend lives here.

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He gave witness on sensational trial.  He

gave evidence at the sensational trial.

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He secured first position in a hundred meter race.  He

secured the first position in one hundred meters race.

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The war has a negative impact over the economy of country.  The

war has a negative impact on the economy of the country.

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It was her, not me who put forth the attractive proposition.  Use

subjective and not objective form when you are writing about doer.  It was she, not I who put forth the attractive proposition.

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The latest exercise was fairly easy than I thought it will be.  The

last exercise was rather easier than I thought it would be.

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The food taste deliciously.  The

food tastes delicious.

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I have seen much of the plays of the Shakespeare acted. I

have seen most of the plays of Shakespeare acted.

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I complemented Prateek for his rank in CAT. I

complemented Prateek on his rank in CAT.

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She teaches you grammar. Isnt it?  She

teaches you grammar. Doesn’t she?

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ABO UT A FTERSCH OOO L Afterschoool conducts three year integrated PGPSE (after class 12th along with IAS / CA / CS) and 18 month PGPSE (Post Graduate Programme in Social Entrepreneurship) along with preparation for CS / CFP / CFA /CMA / FRM. This course is also available online also. It also conducts workshops on social entrepreneurship in schools and colleges all over India – start social entrepreneurship club in your institution today with the help from afterschoool and help us in developing society.

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Why such a programme? 

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To promote people to take up entrepreneurship and help develop the society To enable people to take up franchising and other such options to start a business / social development project To enable people to take up social development as their mission To enable people to promote spirituality and positive thinking in the world

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Who are our supporters?  Afterschoolians,

our past beneficiaries, entrepreneurs and social entrepreneurs are supporting us.  You can also support us – not necessarily by money – but by being promotor of our concept and our ideas.

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About AFTERSCHOOOL PGPSE – the best programme for developing great entrepreneurs     

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Most flexible, adaptive but rigorous programme Available in distance learning mode Case study focused- latest cases Industry oriented practical curriculum Designed to make you entrepreneurs – not just an employee Option to take up part time job – so earn while you learn The only absolutely free course on internet

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Workshops from AFTERSCHOOOL         

IIF, Delhi CIPS, Jaipur ICSI Hyderabad Branch Gyan Vihar, Jaipur Apex Institute of Management, Jaipur Aravali Institute of Management, Jodhpur Xavier Institute of Management, Bhubaneshwar Pacific Institute, Udaipur Engineering College, Hyderabad

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Flexible Specialisations:          

Spiritualising business and society Rural development and transformation HRD and Education, Social Development NGO and voluntary work Investment analysis,microfinance and inclusion Retail sector, BPO, KPO Accounting & Information system (with CA / CS /CMA) Hospital management and Health care Hospitality sector and culture and heritage Other sectors of high growth, high technology and social relevance

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Salient features: The only programme of its kind (in the whole world)  No publicity and low profile course  For those who want to achieve success in life – not just a degree  Indepth knowledge and expertise  Professional approac: World class approach  Strong intellectual and business capabilities  Flexible – you may stay for a month and continue the rest of the education by distance mode. / you may attend weekend classes  Scholarships for those from poor economic background  Latest and constantly changing curriculum – keeping pace with the time  Placement for those who are interested  Admissions open throughout the year  Latest and most advanced technologies, books and study www.afterschoool.tk AFTERSCHOOOL MATERIAL FOR PGPSE PARTICIPANTS material 

Components              

Pedagogy curriculum and approach based on IIM Ahmedabad and ISB Hyderabad (the founder is alumnus from IIMA & ISB Hyderabad) Meditation, spiritualisation, and self development Essential softwares for business Business plan, Research projects Participation in conferences / seminars Workshops on leadership, team building etc. Written submissions of research projects/articles / papers Interview of entrepreneurs, writing biographies of entrepreneurs Editing of journals / newsletters Consultancy / research projects Assignments, communication skill workshops Participation in conferences and seminars Group discussions, mock interviews, self development diaryng Mind Power Training & writing workshop (by Dr. T.K.Jain)

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Pedagogy          

Case analysis, Articles from Harvard Business Review Quiz, seminars, workshops, games, Visits to entrepreneurs and industrial visits Presentations, Latest audio-visuals Group discussions and group projects Periodic self assessment Mentoring and counselling Study exchange programme (with institutions out of India) Rural development / Social welfare projects

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Branches  AFTERSCHOOOL

will shortly open its branches in important cities in India including Delhi, Kota, Mumbai, Gurgaon and other important cities. Afterschooolians will be responsible for managing and developing these branches – and for promoting social entrepreneurs.

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Case Studies  We

want to write case studies on social entrepreneurs, first generation entrepreneurs, ethical entrepreneurs. Please help us in this process. Help us to be in touch with entrepreneurs, so that we may develop entrepreneurs.

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Basic values at afterschoool        

Share to learn more Interact to develop yourself Fear is your worst enemy Make mistakes to learn Study & discuss in a group Criticism is the healthy route to mutual support and help Ask fundamental questions : why, when, how & where? Embrace change – and compete with yourself only

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www.afterschoool.tk social entrepreneurship for better society

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