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Three Key Steps to 4,500 Years of Wisdom
Three Important Steps to Gaining Knowledge
There was once a survey taken of fifty ninety-year-olds in an attempt to learn lessons from their lives before they inevitably died. Here are the three key things they as a group said they regretted.
In order to gain knowledge from the lives of the elderly before the unavoidable end, fifty ninety-year-olds were selected for a poll. Everybody had their own complaints but we were able to sum it up into three categories.
They wished they had:
The main regrets of the elderly questioned were the following:
1. Taken more time in life to reflect... We can directly relate with this because we too take too little time to reflect. I wonder if we can learn from these who found out too late to do anything about it. Is the compromise of busyness really worth it? We must attain balance in life and take time occasionally to look back and learn, resisting the inbuilt urge to forever strive forward into the same old tired mistakes and no real time for our important relationships.
1. Not giving themselves enough time to reflect. We too can find ourselves in this situation due to the fact that we rush through life without giving ourselves time to reflect on the important things. Maybe we should take advantage of their complaints in order to avoid making the same mistakes. Is the promise of an accomplished life really worth it? We must aim towards a balanced life and save some time and then analyze and learn from our past, opposing the impulse to always returning to the same old mistakes and too little time to consolidate the relationships that really matter. ©
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ARTICOLUL ORIGINAL The Incredible Power of Self-Command
We all want to live the best life we can.
We all want to share our full potential with the world.
Every person wants to be somebody special and do something special and leave the world a better place when we die.
The question is how come not very many people achieve this kind of result for themselves before they die?
If you are ready to have the life of your dreams, you must be ready to seize your dreams and actively participate in their cultivation.
ARTICOLUL RESCRIS (GRESIT) Self Command – an Incredible Power
It’s everyone’s wish to live the best life they can.
All of us want to share our full potential with the world.
Everybody wants to be special and do something that will make world a better place when they die.
You got to ask yourself how come not very many people fulfill this wish before they die.
You must be ready to seize your dreams and actively participate in their cultivation, and only then you will be ready to have the life of your dreams. ©
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