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Lecture Seven Exciting Destinations
In today’s lecture… • Marks
– Your midterm exam mark – Notebook mark
• Creating a Guidebook Article – – – –
Guidebook style Making suggestions Creating an itinerary Using modifiers
• Silent Self-Writing Time
What are some places you visited? What did you do there?
Making Suggestions A suggestion is a tip or additional information you think will help someone. Example: I suggest you study harder for your final exam.
The person you are making the suggestion to doesn’t have to do what you are suggesting, but instead it is a good idea.
Writing From Within Page 53
Strong
Weak
… you should… …be sure not to… … you must… … try to… … it’s essential… … you might want to… … you have to… … it would be a good idea to… … you for sure have to… … maybe you could… … don’t forget to… … if you want, go…
Writing From Within Page 52
Making the Most of Your Trip
Imagine standing under Big Ben or walking through Piccadilly Circus. London has so many interesting paces to visit that even if you went for a week you couldn’t see everything. To see as much as you can during your visit, you must plan your trip carefully. First, you should gather information about London. You can go to the travel section of a bookstore, visit a travel agency, or surf the Web for information. Next, make a list of the things you would like to do the most. For example, if you have always wanted to see the Crown jewels, then plan a visit to the Tower of London. After that, look at a map to learn about the underground train (or “Tube”) lines so that you will know how to get around. Finally, write down your travel plans on a piece of paper and carry it in your pocket. Refer to it while you are there so that you won’t miss anything. In conclusion, there is a lot to see in London, so take the time to play your visit beforehand.
Making the Most of Your Trip
Imagine standing under Big Ben or walking through Piccadilly Circus. London has so many interesting paces to visit that even if you went for a week you couldn’t see everything. To see as much as you can during your visit, you mustplan your trip carefully. First, you should gather information about London. You can go to the travel section of a bookstore, visit a travel agency, or surf the Web for information. Next, make alist of the things you would like to do the most. For example, if you have always wanted to see the Crown jewels, then plan a visit to the Tower of London. After that, look at a map to learn about the underground train (or “Tube”) lines so that you will know how to get around. Finally, write down your travel plans on a piece of paper and carry it in your pocket. Refer to it while you are there so that you won’t miss anything. In conclusion, there is a lot to see in London, so take the time to play your visit beforehand.
Examples of Suggestions 1. Paris/ the Louvre
If you go to Paris, be sure not to miss the Louvre. If you go to Paris, it’s essential you visit the Louvre. If you go to Paris, you might want to see the Louvre. If you go to Paris, you have to visit the Louvre.
PICK A CITY, ANY CITY What city would you recommend a friend to go visit? Why? Maybe you have never really traveled, if so, then what Korean city would you recommend a friend to visit? Why?
Questioning Web Diagram WHERE?
WHO? WHAT?
WHEN?
WHY?
HOW?
Making an Itinerary An itinerary is a schedule of the places to go, things to do, and people to see when on a trip.
Make a question diagram about some itinerary ideas for the city you picked.
WHO: Who is your one-day tour designated towards? WHAT: What should guests bring? What sights will they see? WHERE: Where will they be going on this one-day tour? (ex. particular restaurants or other hot spots) Where does the tour start and finish? WHEN: When is the tour? (specific month/ season/ etc.) WHY: Why is this such a great one-day tour? HOW: How much will the total tour cost them? How much extra spending money should they bring?
Making an Itinerary A.M.
7:00 8:00 9:00 10:00 11:00
P.M.
12:00 1:00 2:00 3:00 4:00 5:00 6:00 7:00 8:00 9:00 10:00 11:00
A.M.
12:00
Toronto City Day Tour Itinerary A.M.
7:00 8:00 9:00 10:00 11:00
Meet at Union Station and board the tour bus. Breakfast at Mel’s Diner.
12:00 1:00 2:00 3:00 4:00 5:00 6:00 7:00 8:00 9:00 10:00 11:00
Lunch at Conviction Restaurant. Shopping at the Eaton’s Centre. “ “
12:00
Return to Union Station.
Maple Leaf’s hockey game at the Air Canada Center. “ “
P.M.
Visit the CN Tower. Dinner at the CN Tower Restaurant. “ “ Watch “The Phantom of the Opera” (live theater show). “ “ Late night ice hockey game outside the Toronto City Hall. “ “ Drinks at Don Cherry’s Hockey Pub.
A.M.
Writing From Within Page 56
Guidebook Article Outline
Paragraph 1:
Introductory paragraph (attention getter, main idea, and the guide)
Paragraph 2: Paragraph 3: Paragraph 4:
Activity/ place #1 Activity/ place #2 Activity/ place #3
(Paragraphs 2-4 are called the body paragraphs)
Paragraph 5:
Conclusion paragraph
Guidebook Article Outline INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH: Paragraph 1: attention getter Have you ever wondered what it felt like to be on top of the world? main idea Come to Toronto, Canada for a one-day tour and that’s exactly how you’ll feel. the guide We’ve created a great one-day tour for you that will take you to a Leaf’s hockey game, the CN Tower, and to a live theater show. BODY PARAGRAPHS: Paragraph 2: Maple Leaf’s hockey game Paragraph 3: visit and dinner at the CN Tower Paragraph 4: “Phantom of the Opera” live theatre show
CONCLUSION PARAGRAPH: Paragraph 5: By experiencing not only a live hockey game but also a live show and the breathtaking view at the top of the CN Tower, you’ll end the day wanting to come back to experience more of what Toronto has to offer.
Using Modifiers
Simple and participial adjectives
an adjective describes and adds to a noun. Example: The dangerous river.
affordable breathtaking
appetizing bustling busy dramatic exciting exotic
Writing From Within Page 58
Making the Most of Your Trip a. New York City is known for its skyline. New York is known for its dramatic skyline. b. People walk down the streets.
c. Shops in Chinatown sell food.
d. Tourists love the view from the top of the World Trade Center.
e. Riding New York’s subway is an adventure in itself.
f. The nightlife is famous all over the world.
Making the Most of Your Trip a. New York City is known for its skyline. New York is known for its dramatic skyline. b. People walk down the streets. Busy people walk down the bustling streets. c. Shops in Chinatown sell food.
d. Tourists love the view from the top of the World Trade Center.
e. Riding New York’s subway is an adventure in itself.
f. The nightlife is famous all over the world.
Making the Most of Your Trip a. New York City is known for its skyline. New York is known for its dramatic skyline. b. People walk down the streets. Busy people walk down the bustling streets. c. Shops in Chinatown sell food. Exotic shops in Chinatown sell appetizing food. d. Tourists love the view from the top of the World Trade Center.
e. Riding New York’s subway is an adventure in itself.
f. The nightlife is famous all over the world.
Making the Most of Your Trip a. New York City is known for its skyline. New York is known for its dramatic skyline. b. People walk down the streets. Busy people walk down the bustling streets. c. Shops in Chinatown sell food. Exotic shops in Chinatown sell appetizing food. d. Tourists love the view from the top of the World Trade Center. Tourists love the breathtaking view from the top of the World Trade Center. e. Riding New York’s subway is an adventure in itself.
f. The nightlife is famous all over the world.
Making the Most of Your Trip a. New York City is known for its skyline. New York is known for its dramatic skyline. b. People walk down the streets. Busy people walk down the bustling streets. c. Shops in Chinatown sell food. Exotic shops in Chinatown sell appetizing food. d. Tourists love the view from the top of the World Trade Center. Tourists love the breathtaking view from the top of the World Trade Center. e. Riding New York’s subway is an adventure in itself. Riding New York’s affordable subway is an adventure in itself. f. The nightlife is famous all over the world.
Making the Most of Your Trip a. New York City is known for its skyline. New York is known for its dramatic skyline. b. People walk down the streets. Busy people walk down the bustling streets. c. Shops in Chinatown sell food. Exotic shops in Chinatown sell appetizing food. d. Tourists love the view from the top of the World Trade Center. Tourists love the breathtaking view from the top of the World Trade Center. e. Riding New York’s subway is an adventure in itself. Riding New York’s affordable subway is an adventure in itself. f. The nightlife is famous all over the world. The exciting nightlife is famous all over the world.
Modifying your Body Paragraphs BODY PARAGRAPHS: Paragraph 2: Maple Leaf’s hockey game Toronto is known for it’s action-packed Maple Leaf’s games. Paragraph 3: visit and dinner at the CN Tower A visit and dinner at the top of the fabulous CN Tower is a must. Paragraph 4: “Phantom of the Opera” live theatre show Come watch the highly recommended “Phantom of the Opera” live theatre show.
•
Silent Self-Writing Time 1. Brainstorm ideas for your itinerary using a questioning web diagram 2. Write an itinerary for your one-day tour. (7am -12am) 3. Write a guidebook article outline. 4. Write one modified sentence for each of the three main places on your itinerary.
In today’s lecture… • Marks
– Your midterm exam mark – Notebook mark
• Creating a Guidebook Article – – – –
Guidebook style Making suggestions Creating an itinerary Using modifiers
• Silent Self-Writing Time
What are some places you visited? What did you do there?
Making Suggestions A suggestion is a tip or additional information you think will help someone. Example: I suggest you study harder for your final exam.
The person you are making the suggestion to doesn’t have to do what you are suggesting, but instead it is a good idea.
Writing From Within Page 53
Strong
Weak
… you should… …be sure not to… … you must… … try to… … it’s essential… … you might want to… … you have to… … it would be a good idea to… … you for sure have to… … maybe you could… … don’t forget to… … if you want, go…
Writing From Within Page 52
Making the Most of Your Trip
Imagine standing under Big Ben or walking through Piccadilly Circus. London has so many interesting paces to visit that even if you went for a week you couldn’t see everything. To see as much as you can during your visit, you must plan your trip carefully. First, you should gather information about London. You can go to the travel section of a bookstore, visit a travel agency, or surf the Web for information. Next, make a list of the things you would like to do the most. For example, if you have always wanted to see the Crown jewels, then plan a visit to the Tower of London. After that, look at a map to learn about the underground train (or “Tube”) lines so that you will know how to get around. Finally, write down your travel plans on a piece of paper and carry it in your pocket. Refer to it while you are there so that you won’t miss anything. In conclusion, there is a lot to see in London, so take the time to play your visit beforehand.
Making the Most of Your Trip
Imagine standing under Big Ben or walking through Piccadilly Circus. London has so many interesting paces to visit that even if you went for a week you couldn’t see everything. To see as much as you can during your visit, you mustplan your trip carefully. First, you should gather information about London. You can go to the travel section of a bookstore, visit a travel agency, or surf the Web for information. Next, make alist of the things you would like to do the most. For example, if you have always wanted to see the Crown jewels, then plan a visit to the Tower of London. After that, look at a map to learn about the underground train (or “Tube”) lines so that you will know how to get around. Finally, write down your travel plans on a piece of paper and carry it in your pocket. Refer to it while you are there so that you won’t miss anything. In conclusion, there is a lot to see in London, so take the time to play your visit beforehand.
Examples of Suggestions 1. Paris/ the Louvre
If you go to Paris, be sure not to miss the Louvre. If you go to Paris, it’s essential you visit the Louvre. If you go to Paris, you might want to see the Louvre. If you go to Paris, you have to visit the Louvre.
PICK A CITY, ANY CITY What city would you recommend a friend to go visit? Why? Maybe you have never really traveled, if so, then what Korean city would you recommend a friend to visit? Why?
Questioning Web Diagram WHERE?
WHO? WHAT?
WHEN?
WHY?
HOW?
Making an Itinerary An itinerary is a schedule of the places to go, things to do, and people to see when on a trip.
Make a question diagram about some itinerary ideas for the city you picked.
WHO: Who is your one-day tour designated towards? WHAT: What should guests bring? What sights will they see? WHERE: Where will they be going on this one-day tour? (ex. particular restaurants or other hot spots) Where does the tour start and finish? WHEN: When is the tour? (specific month/ season/ etc.) WHY: Why is this such a great one-day tour? HOW: How much will the total tour cost them? How much extra spending money should they bring?
Making an Itinerary A.M.
7:00 8:00 9:00 10:00 11:00
P.M.
12:00 1:00 2:00 3:00 4:00 5:00 6:00 7:00 8:00 9:00 10:00 11:00
A.M.
12:00
Toronto City Day Tour Itinerary A.M.
7:00 8:00 9:00 10:00 11:00
Meet at Union Station and board the tour bus. Breakfast at Mel’s Diner.
12:00 1:00 2:00 3:00 4:00 5:00 6:00 7:00 8:00 9:00 10:00 11:00
Lunch at Conviction Restaurant. Shopping at the Eaton’s Centre. “ “
12:00
Return to Union Station.
Maple Leaf’s hockey game at the Air Canada Center. “ “
P.M.
Visit the CN Tower. Dinner at the CN Tower Restaurant. “ “ Watch “The Phantom of the Opera” (live theater show). “ “ Late night ice hockey game outside the Toronto City Hall. “ “ Drinks at Don Cherry’s Hockey Pub.
A.M.
Writing From Within Page 56
Guidebook Article Outline
Paragraph 1:
Introductory paragraph (attention getter, main idea, and the guide)
Paragraph 2: Paragraph 3: Paragraph 4:
Activity/ place #1 Activity/ place #2 Activity/ place #3
(Paragraphs 2-4 are called the body paragraphs)
Paragraph 5:
Conclusion paragraph
Guidebook Article Outline INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH: Paragraph 1: attention getter Have you ever wondered what it felt like to be on top of the world? main idea Come to Toronto, Canada for a one-day tour and that’s exactly how you’ll feel. the guide We’ve created a great one-day tour for you that will take you to a Leaf’s hockey game, the CN Tower, and to a live theater show. BODY PARAGRAPHS: Paragraph 2: Maple Leaf’s hockey game Paragraph 3: visit and dinner at the CN Tower Paragraph 4: “Phantom of the Opera” live theatre show
CONCLUSION PARAGRAPH: Paragraph 5: By experiencing not only a live hockey game but also a live show and the breathtaking view at the top of the CN Tower, you’ll end the day wanting to come back to experience more of what Toronto has to offer.
Using Modifiers
Simple and participial adjectives
an adjective describes and adds to a noun. Example: The dangerous river.
affordable breathtaking
appetizing bustling busy dramatic exciting exotic
Writing From Within Page 58
Making the Most of Your Trip a. New York City is known for its skyline. New York is known for its dramatic skyline. b. People walk down the streets.
c. Shops in Chinatown sell food.
d. Tourists love the view from the top of the World Trade Center.
e. Riding New York’s subway is an adventure in itself.
f. The nightlife is famous all over the world.
Making the Most of Your Trip a. New York City is known for its skyline. New York is known for its dramatic skyline. b. People walk down the streets. Busy people walk down the bustling streets. c. Shops in Chinatown sell food.
d. Tourists love the view from the top of the World Trade Center.
e. Riding New York’s subway is an adventure in itself.
f. The nightlife is famous all over the world.
Making the Most of Your Trip a. New York City is known for its skyline. New York is known for its dramatic skyline. b. People walk down the streets. Busy people walk down the bustling streets. c. Shops in Chinatown sell food. Exotic shops in Chinatown sell appetizing food. d. Tourists love the view from the top of the World Trade Center.
e. Riding New York’s subway is an adventure in itself.
f. The nightlife is famous all over the world.
Making the Most of Your Trip a. New York City is known for its skyline. New York is known for its dramatic skyline. b. People walk down the streets. Busy people walk down the bustling streets. c. Shops in Chinatown sell food. Exotic shops in Chinatown sell appetizing food. d. Tourists love the view from the top of the World Trade Center. Tourists love the breathtaking view from the top of the World Trade Center. e. Riding New York’s subway is an adventure in itself.
f. The nightlife is famous all over the world.
Making the Most of Your Trip a. New York City is known for its skyline. New York is known for its dramatic skyline. b. People walk down the streets. Busy people walk down the bustling streets. c. Shops in Chinatown sell food. Exotic shops in Chinatown sell appetizing food. d. Tourists love the view from the top of the World Trade Center. Tourists love the breathtaking view from the top of the World Trade Center. e. Riding New York’s subway is an adventure in itself. Riding New York’s affordable subway is an adventure in itself. f. The nightlife is famous all over the world.
Making the Most of Your Trip a. New York City is known for its skyline. New York is known for its dramatic skyline. b. People walk down the streets. Busy people walk down the bustling streets. c. Shops in Chinatown sell food. Exotic shops in Chinatown sell appetizing food. d. Tourists love the view from the top of the World Trade Center. Tourists love the breathtaking view from the top of the World Trade Center. e. Riding New York’s subway is an adventure in itself. Riding New York’s affordable subway is an adventure in itself. f. The nightlife is famous all over the world. The exciting nightlife is famous all over the world.
Modifying your Body Paragraphs BODY PARAGRAPHS: Paragraph 2: Maple Leaf’s hockey game Toronto is known for it’s action-packed Maple Leaf’s games. Paragraph 3: visit and dinner at the CN Tower A visit and dinner at the top of the fabulous CN Tower is a must. Paragraph 4: “Phantom of the Opera” live theatre show Come watch the highly recommended “Phantom of the Opera” live theatre show.
•
Silent Self-Writing Time 1. Brainstorm ideas for your itinerary using a questioning web diagram 2. Write an itinerary for your one-day tour. (7am -12am) 3. Write a guidebook article outline. 4. Write one modified sentence for each of the three main places on your itinerary.
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