Formula for a Paragraph Topic Sentence: There are many ways to prevent school shootings.
Supporting Detail 1: Transitional Phrase: For example, schools need to be more careful by buying metal detectors for entrance ways. In addition, schools should have several teachers or principals standing in the doorway if the alarm goes off.
Supporting Detail 2: Transitional phrase: Equally important, all schools should have serious talks with their students about school shootings. In these talks, we should talk about how serious it is and what the consequences are. We should not be afraid to talk about school shootings openly so that we can reach a greater number of people.
Supporting Detail 3: Transitional phrase and/or closing phrase: Finally, students should really think about how they treat others and think about how they want to be treated as well. To do this, schools should inform their students about the dangers of bullying and how it can lead to violence and school shootings. By talking about bullying, schools can reinforce the rules and consequences of bullying.