Final Essay Number 5--fleming

Max Leepsons Essay #5 Review

TOPIC Persecution in America ­Native Americans ­talk about ­Cherokee hiding in North Carolina ­Seminole hiding in Florida Everglades ­Women ­talk about ­success ­African­Americans ­talk about ­abolitionists What steps did each group take to be recognized as equals? I.Intro

A.Thesis 1.Although these groups went trough many hardships, they fought long and hard  to be treated as the regular population (white males). II.Body 1 A.Native Americans 1.Problems a)Jackson b)Trail of tears 2.Successes a)Going into hiding (1)Cherokee hiding in North Carolina (2)Seminole hiding in Florida Everglades b)? III.Body 2 A.Women 1.Problems a)Suffrage (voting) b)Right to divorce

IV.Body 3

c)Education d)Overall persecution 2.Successes a)Fixing all of the above

A.African­Americans 1.Problems a)Suffrage b)Slavery 2.Successes a)See Amendments 13­15 b)William Lloyd Garrison V.Conclusion A.Restate thesis

Notes: don’t use 3 pt. thesis use examples