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Dear Mr. Giacomin, I would like to apply for the leadership group for junior school councilor fundraising Firstly I think I am a high quality student for this job because I’m responsible. I am responsible because I take care of my cousin, my friends and most importantly I play with others who are lonely. I try to cheer up juniors that are upset because they look up to grade sixes as leaders. I’m responsible because I clean my room including the house but with my sister. Additionally I’m great for this job because I’m organized. I am organized because when I get my homework I try to finish it in time and give it to the teacher to check. Every day I am organized to come to school in time. Most importantly I am patient. I’m patient because at the canteen I wait in line no matter how long it is I don’t complain, I don’t push in and never ask people to move out the way. Furthermore I am patient because when someone is using my rubber and I need it, I wait patiently and won’t say give it back.

I should get this job because I am responsible,Organized and patient and those are the values you need for a junior school councilor. Your sincerely Akima Garang