Writing – Week 9 Overview Grammar: Irregular Plural Nouns Writing: Informative Article Spelling: Irregular Plural Nouns
Week 9, Day 41 Writing TODAY THE STUDENT WILL: Write an informative article. Read the model with the student in the student text. Informative paragraphs inform the reader about a topic. The example in the student text is written on the topic of pollution. The reader clearly sees this in the topic sentence:
Pollution of the ocean by human activities has become a serious problem. Writing informative paragraphs are often difficult for fourth graders because of a few issues. These issues are listed below with some suggestions to help the student through them. Issue #1: What do I write about? Students sometimes have a hard time thinking about a strong topic to write about. The student may not be connected to current events or news stories. This age, by the way, is a great age to begin talking to the student about current issues. Most fourth graders have the mind power to understand abstractly at this point. So because the student may be slightly disconnected from topics, he may have a tough start.
He can choose pollution, even though it was the example, but he must think of other types or places where pollution occurs. An informative article doesn’t always have to be about a current hot topic issue. He may write a paragraph informing the reader about… A president… a monument… a state… a flower… the making of a crayon… diamond mining… The possibilities are almost endless… and so can the issues be when the student goes to find information. Issue #2: The student chooses a topic, but can’t find the RIGHT information… You may want to start the student out with asking them what they would like to find out about the topic. This is a task you will do on Day 42. Try to have the student narrow the focus a little if the topic seems too large. If the student chooses to write about the White House, ask the student, “What about the White House do you want to know?” Here are some good questions the student may wonder: How many presidents have lived there? How many people live there now? Are pets aloud there? If so, how many? Can people visit the White House? How old is the White House? Why is it painted white? Who goes grocery shopping for the White House? As you can see, some of these questions may be easily answered, while others will be more difficult. One way to help the student with finding information is by using a search engine like google.com. As an adult, you can monitor and manage the information you are seeing and print out information for the student to read through. He then can decide on which articles or paragraphs are the most important. Issue #3: The student wants to copy information word-forword.
Fourth grade is the year, if not earlier, to teach the student about plagiarism. Plagiarism is the process of copying down information that does not belong to you, but you claim it. Although the student probably won’t be selling his informational paragraph for profit, he should still start to get in the habit of giving credit where it is due. He should save all of the websites or books where he found his information to include at the bottom of his paragraph. Encourage the student to change the wordings of sentences to make them his own work. Here are a few examples of how to re-word sentences: Some of these pollutants are things like construction debris, sewage, chemicals, and garbage which include plastics. Some pollutants are garbage, plastics, and some chemicals. Sewage and construction debris are also pollutants. It is no longer legal to dump garbage, sewage, or hazardous waste, but so much is already in the water. States have made it illegal for people to release pollution into waters, however the damage has already been done.
Grammar TODAY THE STUDENT WILL: Spell irregular plural nouns correctly. The student will learn about irregular plural nouns for the next five lessons. These plurals were briefly mentioned in the parent guide on Day 36, but will now have the main focus. These plurals have no “rule” common to all. The student will learn through practice and memorization this week when and where to recognize them.
Irregular Plural Nouns You have already learned to form plurals by adding s, es, or ies, to a noun. Some nouns do not form their plurals this way. Study the rules below for forming irregular plurals.
Rules The plural of some nouns is created by changing the form of the word. Some nouns form their plural by using the same form Examples:
Change the form
Remains the same
man – men child – children tooth - teeth
sheep – sheep deer – deer fish - fish
Task 1 The student will now complete this practice task. Here is the answer key for this: Read the sentences below. Use the word in parenthesis, but write the plural form on the line. 1. I saw three _____sheep__________(sheep) in the field. 2. Some _______men_______(man) tried to round them up. 3. There were _______children__________(child) standing nearby. 4. Next some ________deer________(deer) came on the scene. 5. The _______children_____(child) left to go catch some _____fish______(fish).
Task 2: Study More Examples: With the student, review the list below. Read each word out loud, its plural form, and have the student repeat it back to you.
Singular
Plural
crisis woman foot mouse ox goose axis fungus die
crises women feet mice oxen geese axes fungi dice
Singular
Plural
salmon fowl bison
salmon fowl bison
Spelling TODAY THE STUDENT WILL: Spell irregular plural nouns correctly.
Pretest Day 1. Give student the pretest. Say each spelling word out loud. 2. The student will write all 10 words down on a sheet of paper. 3. Check the spelling words. Any words the student missed will need to be on his new list. 4. The student will write his new list of words (any words missed on the pretest). 5. The student will choose more words from the extra word list to make a list of 10 words.
Here is this week’s spelling list on irregular plural nouns: Basic Words 1. axis/axes 2. bison/bison
Challenge Words appendix/appendices analysis/analyses
3. buffalo/buffaloes
bacterium/bacteria
4. moose/moose cactus/cacti 5. calf/calves
child/children
6. crisis/crises
deer/deer
7. die/dice
dwarf/dwarves
8. echo/echoes
fireman/firemen
9. fish/fish
foot/feet
10. fungus/fungi goose/geese
Week 9, Day 42 Writing TODAY THE STUDENT WILL: Brainstorm about an informative article. The student will brainstorm today about an informative article of his choice. He will follow the directions in the student text, which have him working on a few things today. Here are the items the student needs to complete: 1. Research a topic for an informative article 2. Write the main focus in the middle oval on the brainstorming sheet. 3. Write at least 7 facts surrounding the bubble. 4. Write a topic sentence (engagement sentence) for the article. 5. Decide the order of the facts and write them down.
Grammar TODAY THE STUDENT WILL: Spell irregular plural nouns correctly.
Task 1: Practice Irregular Plurals Read the paragraph below. Insert the plural of the noun in parenthesis. My family took a trip overseas to a country called Norway. We stayed in a house on the fjord where we saw several _____men_______(man) and ___women_____(woman) catching ____fish____(fish). There were ___geese________(goose) in the yard. When we went out one evening for a drive we saw three ____moose___(moose) on the road that were as big as our car. I wanted to go for a hike up on the mountain to find some _____sheep________(sheep), but was a little nervous after seeing the ____moose______(moose). When we actually climbed up we felt as though we were the only __people___(person) in the world.
Task 2: Now look at the underlined words in the paragraph. Make sure you write the correct form of the word (singular or plural) that makes sense on the line. Some are already correct. After going on vacation I wanted to try to do some hiking around home. My mom took me to a large wooded area far from the noise of the____traffic_ (traffic) that runs through my town. The first example of wildlife I saw was a family of __mice_____ (mouse). There was a stream, but I didn’t see any ____fish_____(fish). There was some _____fungus__(fungus) on the rocks. After a while we did see a few _____deer____(deer) walking by. We got cold and our _____feet_____(foot) got wet, so we headed for home. I thought I saw a _____goose______ ( goose), but I might have imagined it.
(symbol for reteaching / extensions) RETEACHING / EXTENSIONS: The student needs / wants more practice with irregular plural word forms. 1. This site provides an interactive matching game of singular nouns and their irregular counter parts: http://www.manythings.org/wbg/irr-plurals1-jw.html 2. Here is another game for the student to play to practice this skill: http://www.manythings.org/wbg/irr_plurals1-mw.html
Spelling TODAY THE STUDENT WILL: Spell irregular plural nouns correctly. The student will be making flash cards for his spelling words today. Here are the directions as seen in the student textbook: Make word cards by writing the singular form in the first column and the plural form in the second. Cut across the bottom of each word, but not down the middle between them. Fold the cards on the middle line so that you can see only one form at a time. (symbol for extensions) EXTENSIONS: HOW CAN THE STUDENT EFFECTIVELY USE FLASH CARDS AS A STUDY TOOL? 1. Timed Spelling Activity Materials: Timer, Spelling Flash Cards Directions: The student sets the timer to start. Press start and ask the student the spellings on the words. When the student is done spelling all of the words on the cards, press the stop button on the timer. Write down the student’s time. Complete this activity during the next few lessons to practice the student’s spelling words. 2. Categories Materials: Spelling Flash Cards Directions: Have the student read each spelling word out loud. Then have him put each word in a row under a category he will write on paper. For example, this is what one column may look like: LIVING THINGS Bison Buffalo Moose Children Calf
Deer fish 3. Artist’s Canvas Materials: Crayons, or other art medium, Spelling Flash Cards Directions: The student will look at his 10 spelling flash cards and will think about a small picture that can be drawn for each one. For example, for the card with “deer” on it, he would draw a deer or a hoof print. Visual learners will enjoy this activity.
Week 9, Day 43 Writing TODAY THE STUDENT WILL: Write the first draft of an informative article. Review the brainstorming sheet out loud with the student. When the student is organized and ready to write, allow him to start on the first draft of the informative article. He will write this in the student text.
Grammar TODAY THE STUDENT WILL: Spell irregular plural nouns correctly. Task 1: Practice the Skill: Read the sentences to find the plural nouns. Some are regular and some are irregular. Underline all plural nouns then place each in the chart where it belongs. 1. My teacher made up a board game complete with cards, dice and animal markers. 2. Several people wanted to play it just because they love animals. 3. The rules stated that we could use the glossaries and appendices from our books.
4. The markers included a few types of fish which no one wanted to be. 5. After he rolled the dice and took a card Paul got the first question on the American bison. 6. When it was my turn the question turned out to be something about mice. 7. We learned that octopi are very intelligent and that the singular of bacteria is bacterium. 8. Did you know that moose are excellent swimmers? 9. Whether it was geese, salmon, or oxen we loved looking for the answers and learning new facts. 10. That was some game about wild game! Regular Plurals cards
Irregular Plurals dice
markers
people
animals
appendices
glossaries
fish
types
bison
swimmers
mice octopi bacteria moose geese salmon oxen game
Spelling
TODAY THE STUDENT WILL: Spell irregular plural nouns correctly. The student will write his words 3 times each, using cursive at least one time.
Week 9, Day 44 Writing TODAY THE STUDENT WILL: Edit an informative article. The student will have an editing checklist to go through. Here it is: •
Does your “engagement” really grab the reader? Highlight it.
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Did you group similar facts remembering to make them separate sentences?
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Do you have a topic sentence for each paragraph that tells what will be your focus in that paragraph? Are there at least 3 other sentences?
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Does it have a finishing statement or does it just trail off? Highlight it.
Grammar TODAY THE STUDENT WILL: Spell irregular plural nouns correctly. The student is given a box of singular nouns. He needs to use at least 5 of them in sentences. Here are the plural forms of those words.
Five of the following must have been used. 1. Bison 2. Moose
3. Crises 4. Men 5. Children 6. Scissors 7. Mice 8. People 9. Feet 10.Deer
Spelling TODAY THE STUDENT WILL: Spell irregular plural nouns correctly.
Choice Day For choice day, allow the student to choose one of the following: 1. Have someone practice your words with you using your word cards. Go over the ones you missed at least 3 times. 2. Write sentences using the singular and plural in each. 3. Take a practice test, and then write the ones you missed 3x.
Week 9, Day 45 Writing TODAY THE STUDENT WILL:
Write an informative article. Today the student will transfer the edited informative article to a final draft.
Grammar TODAY THE STUDENT WILL: Write irregular plural nouns correctly. The student will take a quiz on finding irregular plurals in a paragraph. Assessing Your Knowledge Irregular Plurals Underline all the irregular plurals in the paragraph. You should find 10. We went to a party where we played some crazy games. One was about fishing, but they had a tank of live fish! The water spilled over onto our feet as we tried to catch the goldfish and angelfish with nets. The next game involved chasing geese around the yard to “tag” them. The people were so funny slipping and falling. The scavenger hunt was great as we looked for deer and moose, but they weren’t live ones. The final game was a race to pick the fungi from the garden to make a salad quickly. As we got into our car to go home I had to laugh as I saw two men posing as statues on the lawn. What an unusual event!
Spelling TODAY THE STUDENT WILL: Spell irregular plural nouns correctly.
Spelling Test: Today the student will take a test on the 10 spelling words that have been practiced all week. This will be an assessment. Say each spelling word out loud for the student and use it in a sentence. Here is an example:
“Spelling word number one is after. After. After I wash the dishes, I will dry them. After. Number two is scratch. Scratch. I will scratch my back when it is itchy. Scratch.” Give the student at least 10 seconds to write each spelling word. It is acceptable to repeat any or all of the words as you go if the student needs it. This will be assessed. At the bottom of the test page, you will notice a place where students are to write sentences. When the student writes the sentence, everything about that sentence should be correct. Capitalization, spelling, and end punctuation are all counted with these sentences. Here are the suggested dictation sentences for the spelling test: The echo of the child was heard for miles. All of the echos were loud. If you are comfortable with making up the sentences on your own, this will be a possibility throughout the program. You will need to choose any two words from the student’s spelling list. Think of simple sentences for the child to spell. The most “challenging” word in the sentence should be the spelling word itself.